People have many ideas of heaven.

Some say heaven is a paradise in the clouds, crowded by feathery angels, who strum their golden harps to an alluring tune. Some say heaven is where God's domain, where he brings lost ones from their graves, to live on peacefully for eternity. Some even say heaven doesn't exist. But I found heaven.

I found heaven, and it lies in her azure eyes.

If you could stare into those royal orbs, you wouldn't deny, those irises hold an Eden. I pity the population that will never be able to look into those eyes, and not experience true heaven.

A heaven that pulls you in, and drowns you in perfect blue waters. A heaven that causes you to melt like butter when she gazes at you with those eyes that are bluer than the clearest skies. A heaven that pierces you like a dagger through the heart when clouded with salty tears. The heaven in her eyes were more powerful than God himself or the Hell beneath the soil.

She had a celestial haven in her eyes, where she was a goddess. I'd worship her on my hands and knees until my knees bled and the skin on my palms withered to bone, just to gaze into that Eden for 10 seconds.

It's hard for me not to think about and it kills me to look away. And those azure blue eyes turned to me, I was caught staring.

Kimiko Tohomiko had a heaven in her eyes, and that heaven was glaring at me.


Wow, not only have I pumped this story full of similes and metaphors, but I've probably overused the word heaven. I used it 12 times.. but in my defense there are a very limited amount of words that are synonyms for heaven. It's kinda mushy and not very Raimundo-ish but, I kinda feel like Raimundo has really deep thoughts like this. Anyway, I hope you like this very comparative little fic, it was just a quick little story I came up with at 3:30am.

xxKimberly