My third attempt at a story. All constructive criticism is welcome but no
cussing on reviews ok? Please R/R.thanx! Ciao!
Someone special.
Chap 1.Where is Legolas?
"Hey, Lilanna!"he shouted." What are you doing?" Where have you been Legolas? Everyone was looking for you!" shouted his best friend. They were? For what? Oh."Can you please go back without me?"
" Legolas, what is the matter with having to fall in love? I mean I know how much you love going on adventures but you can't be single for the rest eternity.
"Yes, I can be single forever or I can fall in love on my own withOUT help from anyone or anything. Goodbye and you did not find me or speak to me at all!"
She stares at his retreating back and turns back toward Mirkwood.
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(Later that day)
*** Why do I have to be the one to go to Rivendel? Of everyone father chose me to leave I mean...***his thoughts were interrupted by a soft knock at the door*knock knock knock*
"Who is it?" "It's Lilanna, we need to talk"
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Aw gee a cliffhanger. Please r&r because I want to put the new chapter up! Thanx! I know it's short but since it's 5:30 in the morning I did good so cut me some slack k? Adios!
Someone special.
Chap 1.Where is Legolas?
"Hey, Lilanna!"he shouted." What are you doing?" Where have you been Legolas? Everyone was looking for you!" shouted his best friend. They were? For what? Oh."Can you please go back without me?"
" Legolas, what is the matter with having to fall in love? I mean I know how much you love going on adventures but you can't be single for the rest eternity.
"Yes, I can be single forever or I can fall in love on my own withOUT help from anyone or anything. Goodbye and you did not find me or speak to me at all!"
She stares at his retreating back and turns back toward Mirkwood.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
(Later that day)
*** Why do I have to be the one to go to Rivendel? Of everyone father chose me to leave I mean...***his thoughts were interrupted by a soft knock at the door*knock knock knock*
"Who is it?" "It's Lilanna, we need to talk"
***********************************************
Aw gee a cliffhanger. Please r&r because I want to put the new chapter up! Thanx! I know it's short but since it's 5:30 in the morning I did good so cut me some slack k? Adios!
