((A/N)) I'm gonna tell you before reading, this a contestshipping, (I really really hate AshxMay), if you don't like it, don't read, or do read, but don't review about that. But review anyway, I really like to know what you guys think about my first fanfic, (I really never made one before). For some reasons I left Max out of it, not that I don't like him!, but it just didn't fit here
Note; English isn't my first language, we don't speak it home. It is my second language, (that means for me, the language I learnt after my first) so there may be some errors and mistakes.
And I am an amateur writer. (I'm 15 year old without any scholing in it), well, please tell me what points I have to improve.
so REVIEW please.
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Ash: "Another story about me and my adventures. This will be lots of fun!"
me: (blinks) ".. well..erm...no. You're not the main character in this story.
Ash: "Huh? I thought this was about Pokemon?
me: "..Yeah..sort off. I first wanted to do an AAML ((A/N: Ash and Misty love, for the people who don't know)) thingy, but..."
Ash: (Gulps)
Drew: "And tell me again, what am I doing here,.. (flickes his bangs)...with these losers."
May: (Very angry) "I don't want to have anything to do with this jerk!"
me: (softly)"..That will be a problem in the story then. (normal (very loud) voice) ..Can someone of you just do the disclaimer?
Brock: "Since I haven't said anything; (Disclaimer) Riikani doesn't own Pokemon, me or any of the characters."
me: "Thank you, Let's get this story started" (really pimped up)
Chapter 1.
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"Ash, you're such a jerk", yelled May. They were argueing about something stupid again.
"Why don't you go, when you think I'm such a jerk!", Ash returned
Now May was really fired up; "Maybe I will", she yelled and ran away.
"Ash, let her go", said Brock to Ash, who wanted to chase her, understanding how she was feeling. "She just needs to calm down"
Brock was right many times before and this was no exception, even though he didn't knew. May ran a few miles and sank panting to the ground.
'Why does he have to be so stubborn all the time?' May asked herself.
"What are you doing here", a familiar voice said and May turned around. The first she saw was a flash of green. Drew was standing right before her, while casually flicked his bangs.
"A fight with Ash again." concluded Drew, before she answered.
'He's cocky again',May thought angry, but his voice didn't sound that mean to her, almost kind, and it confused her.
"What do you want", May asked him, wondering why he bothered.
Drew glared at her. "I was training, but then you came and fell down at my training spot", he answered.
May now saw his Roselia, standing next to him. "Sorry", she muttered, she didn't like apologizing to that green-haired rival of hers. But Drew just shrugged his shoulders. "There's nothing to do about it now", said Drew and walked away.
"Roselia, return", Drew said and his pokemon returned with a relieved "Roseliaa", to her Pokeball.
He turned around, and saw May still sitting on the ground,looking down. 'I can't just leave her there', thought Drew, scolding himself for caring.
So he said: "I will buy you a dinner, if you like", while he hoped his voice didn't ring hopeful.
Two big Sapphires looked at him, and he wondered why he never noticed her eyes were that blue before.
May was really confused, 'First he was mad at me because I ran into his training-ground and now he's offering to buy me dinner' she thought, and tried to read his reasons of his face but she couldn't read anything from his straight face.
Drew saw her confused look on her face so he pointed the sky out. "Have you seen how dark it is already, smart one. And it looks like you carry no money with you" he said, his voice lightly tinged with sarcasm, and he thought this was a pretty good excuse.
"Thank you, Drew", said May softly. Even though he was arrogant most of the time, he could be nice, what confused her even more.
"Do you still come, or shall I just leave you here" said Drew flicking his hair ((A/N; I still haven't figured out why does that, but it's kind cute so I'll just leave it)), and he walked away.
May jumped up and ran after him.
Drew chose a rather expensive restaurant, and May actually enjoyed the time. Drew was nice to her and didn't make any insults.
When they were finished, May saw Ash and Brock outside the restaurant, looking for her. She waited untill Drew had paid and ran outside.
"Brock, Ash!" she yelled and waved. Meanwhile Drew had followed her and was now thinking of a way how he had to explain to May's friends he had dinnered with May.
Ash and Brock came walking back with relieved faces.
"Where have you been" Ash asked.
"I have been eating with Drew here", May said, pointing at Drew.
Ash' face turned suspicious. "Why did you?" he asked, but May jumped in.
"Ash, let it be, would you?" May asked, seeing the trouble coming. She turned to Drew; "Thank you, it was fun"
Drew shrugged his shoulders, "It was fun..", he saw the shocked faces and imagined how strange it must have sounded from him. "...for a loser" and he flicked his bangs.
It had the desired effect, Ash got all fired up and looked like he would have Pikachu Thunder-bolt him, but Drew didn't care about Ash, he was just a nuisance. He looked at May and he hoped she would react angrily and shouting at him, but shocked he saw her eyes filling with tears.
"Drew, you jerk" cried May and she ran away.
Ash gave Drew an angry look and ran after May, Brock just behind him.
They both didn't saw the shocked face of Drew. He didn't want to hurt May, just tease her a little.
He sighed sadly and thought; 'I might have been too harsh, she really enjoyed the time apparently'.
He put his hands in his pockets and walked away
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((A/N)) I really want to know your opinions about the first chapter. The second one is coming up. There will be 8 or something. So please review.
