this is my first finfic so if it's bad it's ok just tell so yea -
the war of the key blades every one who has a keyblade see mostly the something because everytime they go somewhere they see a man that keep looking at them so one day they wanted to talk to him so they all said hi and he said you been chosen to play the game and they said what game he said nothing and he was gone then they were like want to kno what he was talking about but the next day they were at a arana and now they know what he was talking about they were chosen to play a game called life and death and thay looked to find a door but their were none but they find out their were alot of poeple wanting something but the guy from befor was talking he said it's time to fight poeple and they now kno he was talking about them and he said for the first fight it was roxes vs riku and they said sorry but i have to kill u or you will kill me siad rika sora said i kno but kairi she's going to cry because one of us will die and yea u kno said sora but kairi herad them she was crying when she herad riku and sora had to fight and then she was in a seat to watch but she did not want to watch but she had to she had to watch because sora she loved and riku he was just a friend but she did not want sora or riku to die because sora was just 15 and riku 16 but the fight begin sora was just trying to attack they were fighting for a long time but then riku fell because sora did not stop attacking and he cant't block them all and sora kill riku and had blood everywhere kairi was crying sora saw her crying he then wanted to talk to her that he had to he want to live because he loved her but he was like i can't she might not love me but he said whatever even if she does not he did not care so he got to her room and said kairi it's sora can i come in kairi said yes and he said kairi i need to talk to u and she said ok about what she said he said about riku i kno your sad but i had to ok i had to live because i i i what sora just tell me i love u kairi he said she said u do he said yes i do kairi every since we met i loved u that why i saved u and i had to become a heartless but u saved me to u made me have my heart back sora said sora that mean's if u did not love me u no i word kairi as a friend sora i loved u to but we might have to kill each other don't worry we wont i im going to kill him thatguy is going to pay for what he done to us he made me kill riku my best friend sora befor you do that what kairi kairi kissed sora in the lips and sora give a kissed back he said im going so hopeful lea i do not die.

so thats the first chapter tell me how good it is im going to make chapter 2 soon