Temptation

Okay be nice it is my first fanfic

Chapter 0ne: The meeting

One night in Planet Sprite the Spritans were fighting for their lives, and losing. Their foe, a low level group of Saiyans.

"Aahhh," cried the Spritan as he fell, down for the count.

"Damn you Saiyans," said the Spritan chief.

The fighting continued through the night, until thre were only the five Saiyans standing.

"Well, that was harder than I thought," said Torah.

"Yeah, I know what you mean," said Fasha.

"Hmph, what are you talking about that was as easy as pie," said their leader, Bardock.

"Say what you want to, Bardock, but I still say it was difficult," said Torah.

A few days later on their home planet, Vegeta.

"Hey, Bardock we have another mission, let's go," said Torah.

"Alright let's hit it," said Bardock.

That night on planet Oreoko(thanks for the name Lauren) the Saiyans were in full pursuit, unfortunately this planet had no moon and was ranked 10 out of 10 in difficulty. So, the Saiyans were having a few troubles. Finally, after a night of fighting the Saiyans came out on top.

"Well, that was hard," said Torah.

"I even have to admit for a second I thought we weren't going to make it," said Bardock.

"Wow, I never thought I would hear those words come out of your mouth," laughed Fasha.

"Very fun….," Bardock started to say, but was struck down to the ground.

"Bardock, speak to us," said Fasha.

"Hahaha," said the Oreokan who blasted him," he had that coming."

"Go to hell," said Torah as he blasted him to oblivion.

"We better get him to the infirmary, and quick," said Borgos.

Back on Vegeta, that night

The Saiyans carried their fallen comrad to the infirmary.

"Good gracious me, what happened?" asked Planthor.

"He got surprised attacked," Torah replied.

Well, quick let's put him in the chamber," said Fasha.

A few hours later.

'Huh, where am I,' thought Bardock. He looked around to find he was in the reguvination tank.

'What on Vegeta am I doing here,' thought Bardock,' oh yeah, I was blasted by that bastard Oreokan, hey where is everybody, how am I supposed to get out of here?' As if someone had heard his thoughts, a beautiful young lady walked in. 'Who the hell is she, she must be one of the nurses,' thought Bardock. All of a sudden the tank opened. 'Finally,' thought Bardock as he stepped out of the chambers. The Saiyan girl blushed. Bardock scowled, 'Dumb woman,' he thought as he got dressed. "Hey, you wouldn't happen to know where my crew is, would you?" Bradock asked. "I believe Mr. Bardock, there at the club," said the young lady. "Thanks, umm what is your name?" Bardock asked. "My name is Tannipu," said the young girl. "Tannipu, eh, how old are you?" asked Bardock. "16, you?" Tannipu asked. "16," Bardock replied. "What is your class," Bardock asked. "Third," Tannipu replied. "Me too," Bardock said. Well, it was nice meeting you, Bardock, but I have to go, talk to you later, I hope," said Tannipu. 'I hope so, too,' thought

Bardock self-consiously. "Um, Tannipu, I was wondering… would you like to go out with me this Friday at six o' clock?" Bardock asked. "I'd love to, here's my address," Tannipu said handing him a piece of paper. "Great, see you then," Bardock said. "Bye," said Tannipu. "Bye," said Bardock. After she left Bardock thought to himself, ' Damn, she's fine,' thought Bardock.
Out in the hall
'I have a date, I have a date, I can't wait to tell Vega,' thought Tannipu skipping down the hall with a huge smile on her face.

The next chapter: The big date

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