A Villains Story or is it?

I crouched down in the dirty street of Terim, the wind pulling along the dust as the silvery moon hung in the sky. I quickly move into the shadow of the inn, and wait for Eragon, the hero of this town. He was going to get me killed. I hear the inn door creak open, so I notch my arrow, and wait. Eragon steps out of the inn, onto the path, so I take Amie, at the leg, and let my finely made arrow fly, like a lightning bolt out into the night, and hit my target with a fleshy thud. I ran forwards and grabbed my life line, out of his dirty pocket, when I realized the arrow only scraped the surface of his leg, the shock made him fall, for that I'm great full.

I raced through the badly lit street into the looming forest, which I don't want to enter again, after the first time when I was caught like a wild animal in its depth, by the mystery man, who I soon discovered to be Morzan and his followers, and taken to the metal house with no roof. When I was there they set me on this dangerous task of finding a key to the castle, which is now my life line. I jump over fallen trees catching my pale leg on a fallen tree, ripping some of my leg open exposing a flesh new wound, but I can't stop.

"Shadow wait" Eragon yells which is how I know he is right on my heel, I sprint faster, like a mouse running from a cat, but he grabs me by my blonde and one blacked streaked hair, I grab my throwing knife and turn around spearing him through the chest, before I noticed what I was doing, I pull my blade out, leaving a gaping hole in his chest, which then begins to spray his repulsive blood everywhere, splattering me. "You should have just let me take the key" I scream. I move my body away from the horror movie sight, and sprinted away. I can still see his strong chest layered in blood, his blonde hair cover in his own disgusting liquid, his brown eyes begging me to stop the pain, I can't believe I killed my own brother, my only family; he even had my single black streak.

Just when dawn was about to break, I see him, Morzan, waiting by the little house of wood I was captured at, his brown eyes is all I can see because of his mask, which is highly un necessary, seeing tho I know who he is. I run up to him screaming

"are you happy now I killed my own brother because of you." He just stairs at me "well are you happy? Here's your stupid key, take it and leave me alone" I throw the silver object at him. Then I hear a sound… laughter, merciless cruel laughter, coming from behind the pitch black mask, before I realised what was happening, I see the bloodied tip of a blade emerge from my stomach gasp doubling over, as the blade is yanked free of my dying body. I scream every section of my body is burning of is it freezing? I crash to the ground. I guess I was always a dead girl.