A/N: I wrote this on the spur of the moment a couple weeks ago and after
editing it a bunch of times (I'm still not sure if that was enough) I have
decided to post it. It is written in four different points of view,
hopefully it wont get to confusing. And so you know it can get really hard
writing a story without any names.
We sat inches from each other. I had never noticed how truly beautiful she was. Yes I had seen it, how could I not? But I had never really paid attention to it, or at least I tried not to. She had a twinkle that my wife had lacked since that day, but her sister, the woman before me, had stayed strong. Her soft hair curled gently near her eyes. The sweet scent of mango was so much more exotic than the cinnamon fragrance that typically filled my nose. Her melodic voice comforted my troubled heart.
*****
I curled tighter into my sister's arms. When had things gotten to this? I loved him with all my soul. Our fights tore me apart. It's amazing how much her, my sister's, comforting touch meant to me. If she wasn't here for me I don't know where I'd be. Certainly I wouldn't be doing well. My other sister was upstairs trying to calm down my seething husband. I loved my family so much it literally hurt sometimes. Like at that moment, I could actually feel a twinge in my heart. I wasn't sure what it was and I wasn't sure I wanted to know.
*****
I subconsciously moved closer to him, his gorgeous face pulling towards him. I suddenly forgot why I was up there, but it didn't matter. Nothing did. The fact that he was my brother-in-law, the fact that my sister was in love with him, everything that mattered seemed to trickle out of my memory. A tingle shot through my spine every time he spoke. His heat radiated off my own goosebumped skin. Our faces inched closer to eachother.
****
I hated to see her like this. I hated to see anyone like this, but especially my sisters. She shuddered and I tightened my arms around her. She hated even the tiniest fights, and this, well it was definitely not tiny. Something was not right, I could feel it. A strange sense of foreboding came over me.
A/N: I have this story almost entirely written so the more you review the more I will post! Hee hee :D. Oh and thanks in advance to Prupie1329 for helping me out.
We sat inches from each other. I had never noticed how truly beautiful she was. Yes I had seen it, how could I not? But I had never really paid attention to it, or at least I tried not to. She had a twinkle that my wife had lacked since that day, but her sister, the woman before me, had stayed strong. Her soft hair curled gently near her eyes. The sweet scent of mango was so much more exotic than the cinnamon fragrance that typically filled my nose. Her melodic voice comforted my troubled heart.
*****
I curled tighter into my sister's arms. When had things gotten to this? I loved him with all my soul. Our fights tore me apart. It's amazing how much her, my sister's, comforting touch meant to me. If she wasn't here for me I don't know where I'd be. Certainly I wouldn't be doing well. My other sister was upstairs trying to calm down my seething husband. I loved my family so much it literally hurt sometimes. Like at that moment, I could actually feel a twinge in my heart. I wasn't sure what it was and I wasn't sure I wanted to know.
*****
I subconsciously moved closer to him, his gorgeous face pulling towards him. I suddenly forgot why I was up there, but it didn't matter. Nothing did. The fact that he was my brother-in-law, the fact that my sister was in love with him, everything that mattered seemed to trickle out of my memory. A tingle shot through my spine every time he spoke. His heat radiated off my own goosebumped skin. Our faces inched closer to eachother.
****
I hated to see her like this. I hated to see anyone like this, but especially my sisters. She shuddered and I tightened my arms around her. She hated even the tiniest fights, and this, well it was definitely not tiny. Something was not right, I could feel it. A strange sense of foreboding came over me.
A/N: I have this story almost entirely written so the more you review the more I will post! Hee hee :D. Oh and thanks in advance to Prupie1329 for helping me out.
