One month later
Hi. I've never written a fanfic before, and I only thouught that I would write Harry potter or Skulduggery Pleasant etc... But in English, we read lord of the flies and now im addicted. This is all description andd only one chapter(So far anyway) but please review and I would like to know what you think. Thank you. Oh yeah, and Jack Merridew is my fave character. And thanks to my english teacher, this book is the best!
Jack Merridew
He could remember it. The beautiful lilac coloured sea, the colourful coral. He could remember the golden sands, the mountain and... the blood. The blood, the pain and the hate. But most of all, he could remember Ralph. Ralph, the Ralph that had been voted leader that Jack had turned his back on, litterly driving everyone to insanity. He had to move school, home, make new friends. But no mattter how hard he tried, he couldn't forget it. He wanted to forget it more than anythiing else. He was Jack Merridew. An insane cold blooded murderer. A lier. A he would never forget it.
Ralph
His life had turned around in a few months. Five months he had been on that island. And that was equelevent to hell. Piggy, Simon almost all the other boys were dead. Except for one...Jack. If he saw Jack Merridew ever again, he would kill him. Jack had killed many, and Ralph would get his revenge. He ahd to tell Piggys aunt, and he never even knew Piggys real name up to then. But it didn't matter what his name was. Piggy was gone. And he was never coming back.
Sam'n'eric
(Sam)
(Eric)
(Both)
We killed easily for
Jack Merridew. But we all knew that
the lord of the flies would get his way. We gave up on
Ralph and piggy and became
Savages.
Sorry it's short I'll write a lot more next time.( If you want me to write about your favorite character, just review and say so. Thanks for reading! Oh, yeah, next time i update, it'll be the chapter I did for my assesment. Thanks for reading and please review! :)
xxxGraceful Shadows
