Well this is my first attempt at fanfiction so I hope it has turned out ok. I'd love it if you'd take the time to review and tell me what you think (no flames please).
Read all the way down to the bottom – there's a twist.
I hope you enjoy it :)
Disclaimer: Stephenie Meyer owns all
Cold, hard teeth bit into my neck.
I could feel the venom rushing into my bloodstream. My body stiffened as the excruciating pain began to take hold. Every part of me started to throb and ache as the poison ran marathons through my veins. Each movement was agony. Each minute felt like an eternity. Opening my mouth to scream, I was met with silence. No sound could force itself through my trembling lips.
Alice was right when she told me that this would be the most unbearable experience of my life. Not even her words, not even mine, could describe the sensation I was experiencing. It was like nothing human; nothing that anyone else could even begin to comprehend.
The only thing that kept me sane in my suffering was Edward. Though pain gripped my body, and hurt pulsed through every part of me; Edward commanded my thoughts.
I envisioned it being over.
We sit together in our meadow as the sun sets in the distance. Our bodies are entwined. I feel the icy touch of his hand on my face; tracing the line from my lips to the bridge of my nose. I'm looking into his bright topaz eyes and he's staring back into mine. Time stands still. Perfection.
The touch of his icy hands seems to leak from my thoughts. Frosty fingers touch my cheek as I lie there; hurting. Edward is with me in that moment. I can feel his heart fusing with mine as he is there beside me. And so, despite the aches all over my body, despite the profanities I'm screaming in my head, and despite the agony I'm experiencing; it is almost bearable. The mere presence of Edward comforts me, and, from where I lie, this is more important than any pain I have to go through in order to be with him for eternity.
The infinite hours of suffering abruptly come to an end.
My body is suddenly still. Every ounce of agony has left. It dawns on me that it is all over; the days of torment, the hours of anguish and fear.
"Edward!" I shriek; exhilarated.
My eyes fly open and begin to take in the scene around me. I am lying in a clearing. Trees border the small opening in the thick forest inside which I lie. It is nighttime. The full moon leers at me; almost scowling.
And I am alone. Utterly and completely alone.
That was a relatively short chapter - I wanted to have the cliffhanger-style ending. I hope you liked it :)
I have ideas for future chapters but let me know what you think and whether or not I should write them. I'm not sure if I should continue it.
Please review as I'd love to hear your thoughts.
Chanel-Chic
