A TWIN?!

It was a clear morning on Ron's 11th birthday. He was very excited because he knew that he was going to get his letter to Hogwarts. After all Fred and George had gotten theirs. As he was walking down the stairs at the Burrow, he heard his parents whispering
/about something.

"I know dear but I don't know if he's ready!" "The boy's 11 years old! He deserves a right to know!" "Butwhat if it's too much to take in?"

"Mum? Dad? What's going on?" "Nothing dear. Your father and i were just discussing something, but don't let it concern you. Besides look what came in with the post today!"

Ron looked at the letter with wide eyes. This was the letter that would change his life. He looked over at his parents and saw something behind his mothers back. "What's that?" "Oh this?!" This is...um... just the rest of the post. Bills and such... Well
/what are you waiting for! Open your letter!"

Ron eagerly broke the Hogwarts seal and opened his letter. He already new what the letter looked like on the inside from seeing Fred and George opening theirs. The thing he was most excited about was the ticket to the platform. That was how he was going
/to get there. How he was going to get to that beautiful castle called Hogwarts School ofWitchcraft andWizardry to study magic.


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