SUMMRY: Temari is bored and decided to annoy shikamaru : one shot

so this is my first fanfic so plz no hate.

Would love to have feedback on what I could have done better.

So plz rate and give feedback :p

3rd person p0v

So what are you doing in my house again" shikamaru said with a sigh looking at the most troublesome women he ever met (besides his mom) "well I was bored and thought I would come bother you" she said with a smug smirk "Damn it why is she so annoying" "well I'm not in the mood to entertain you so go big someone else and leave me alone" shikamaru said in a rather annoyed tone. "why shika I can't believe you'd kick a girl out why it's raining out side" she said with mock surprise. He look out the window too see it was indeed raining "when did it start raining" "yeah well I'm sure you'll live its just a light rain" and right as he finished the rain started pouring as if Thay were in a hurricane. "Damn it why dose God hate me so" he looked at temari to see a triumphant grin spread across her face. he sighed "fine you can stay until the range stops but in the meantime let's play a game of shogi" he said with a tiered look "fine by me but done cry when I beat you" she grinned as they made there way to the shogi bored in the living room not Reilly caring about the rain any more.

I know it's short but it's my first so I thought hay why not make a one shot and see what kind of feedback I get .So there it is hoped u liked it and plz tell me if it was good or not. thx :)