I have updated this poem so that it's now a sonnet. 14 lines and 10 syllables on each. Hope it's accurate, although I don't think it's in iambic pentameter. sorry.:(

I will be going through all my poems and improving them so look out for the word Edited.


Sad Today

I am sad today but I don't know why.

The weak wind tickles my ear as I lay

With a bright sun beaming above the sky.

It should have be a happy day today,

Alas it is not. Though I will not weep.

The reason of my sorrow, is of love.

A woman who holds in her guarded keep,

Another mans heart. Only to have both

Heart's broken. And mine shattered. She's like my

Air and poison; a painful pleasure. Though

Tragic, but true; I can love with my eyes

from a far distance. But not with my soul

ever. That is why I am sad today

The real reason I am sad everyday


Edited...:D