I have updated this poem so that it's now a sonnet. 14 lines and 10 syllables on each. Hope it's accurate, although I don't think it's in iambic pentameter. sorry.:(
I will be going through all my poems and improving them so look out for the word Edited.
Sad Today
I am sad today but I don't know why.
The weak wind tickles my ear as I lay
With a bright sun beaming above the sky.
It should have be a happy day today,
Alas it is not. Though I will not weep.
The reason of my sorrow, is of love.
A woman who holds in her guarded keep,
Another mans heart. Only to have both
Heart's broken. And mine shattered. She's like my
Air and poison; a painful pleasure. Though
Tragic, but true; I can love with my eyes
from a far distance. But not with my soul
ever. That is why I am sad today
The real reason I am sad everyday
Edited...:D
