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this is my firs fanfiction, so please try to read it and enjoy it I hope you review it and please you can uses criticism


Chapter one: Invitations

Lily was in the garden of her house, reading a book peacefully (when isn't she reading?) but the peace quickly was gone, because her older sister Petunia came into the garden screaming with an owl on her head. Lily smiled because she knew that the owl was Ellen's, Blaight.

"Can you say to this ugly thing that I don't like animals?" said Petunia in a hysterical voice.

"It isn't my fault that no one likes you, even animals," Lily said after getting her mail.

Dear Lily,

How are you? I'm fine. If you remember that on the Hogwarts Express we were talking about what we will be doing this summer and I hope that you remember that Paloma said that she will be in Spain while we are in our houses bored and miserable, so I was thinking (yes, I THINK) that you could come and spend the rest of the holidays in my house and when Paloma can come here too. What do you think?

I am awaiting your reply.

Yours,

Ellen

P.S. Answer soon because if you don't come there will be one less in the group because I will die of boredom.

Lily smiled again.

"This girl is crazy," she thought. She went to the living room

where her parents were watching TV.

"Lily dear, we have to talk," said her mother, Rose Evans, a beautiful woman with red hair and black eyes.

"I have to tell you something too, but please talk first," said Lily.

"Well, we have to go to the XVI exposition of Medicine of Europe, in France, and the flight is for tomorrow evening, 3 pm," said David Evans, a brown haired man with a few grey hairs and deep green eyes like Lily's.

"Sorry dear, but you have to stay with Petunia."

"Don't worry, because Ellen has invited me to her house to spend the rest of the holidays with her. If you let me go, of course."

"Of course you can go! I have to ask Petunia if she would like to ask Nicole if she can stay with her this holiday instead," said Mrs. Evans as she left the living room.

Lily left the living room and ran to her room. She took a piece of parchment, ink and a feather quill and wrote:

Dear Ellen,

I won't ask 'how are you', because your last letter said that you were really bored. I don't know if I'm any better off, because I am with my loving and caring sister.

My parents said that I can come and stay with you. AH and for once, you think life isn't bad…

Kisses,

Lily

P.S. How will I get to your house? And WHEN? I hope it's soon…PLEASE!

She put the letter on Pexy's leg, her snowy owl (maybe Hedwig´s a relative?), and sent her to Helen's house, then she started to pack and in 5 minutes, Mejer, Helen's parents owl arrived with another letter.

Dear Lily,

I forgot to tell you that I will come for you tomorrow at 5 o'clock on the Knight Bus.

Ellen

P.S. If you have sent a letter, Pexy will stay here.

Lily was very excited. She couldn't wait

Lily was confused, because that was the first time that Helen had wrote such a short letter; she made a mental note to remember to ask her about that.

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The next morning she woke up in a good mood and went off jogging to the kitchen, hoping that her mother had cooked her famous chocolate cookies, but when she entered the kitchen her parents were going crazy.

"What's going on?" asked Lily.

"The flight, dear, the flight is in one hour," said Mrs. Evans annoyed

"It was at 3:00Pm, wasn't it?" asked Lily, checking her

watch. 11:00AM.

"Yes, it was, but you know how travel is dear," said Ms. Evans more annoyed

"Lily please be a good girl at your friend's house, behave yourself in school, get good grades and please say goodbye to your sister from us, she hasn't woken up yet."

She watched as her parents got in the car and left the house, and then the annoying, bossy voice of Petunia said, "They left already?"

Lily nodded and Petunia did a silent victory gesture, then she went to the door.

"Wait, wait, wait. Where are you going dressed like this?" Lily asked.

Petunia was wearing loads of make-up, a mini-skirt and a tight and provocative T-shirt.

"That is none of your business!" said Petunia in an You-are-just-a-scum-in-my-life tone.

"I demand respect! I'm your sister!"

"Even if you were the Queen of England, I wouldn't respect a freak like you! yelled Petunia.

"At least I am just a freak, but you are just a whore, whose 'charm' only works with purple pigs like Vernon Dursley!" yelled Lily. You wouldn't want to make Lily mad.

Petunia tried to find another insult for her next remark, but she found none and instead left dramatically and slammed the door. Why did Lily and Petunia have to be sisters?

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At 5 o'clock, Lily was ready and waiting for Ellen. Please Lily, if you thought that Ellen would be ON TIME you must be crazy, Lily thought. Then 5 minutes later Ellen appeared along with the Knight Bus.

"LILY!" said Ellen. "Come on! Lets go!" In Lily's opinion, she was like a hyperactive kid.

Finally, Lily was to ride on the Knight Bus. She had read about it but never travelled in it. Then she sat down and PUM! The bus began to move.

Oh, my lord, she thought, then she felt the speed of the bus vibrate in her skin. How Helen was perfectly OK when that damn bus moved like that I will never know, she thought when she saw her friend pretty calm.

Ellen was the common blonde. She wasn't stupid but she wasn't the most intelligent person in her year. She was the opposite of Lily. But she was really beautiful with blue eyes just like a deep sea. At last, they arrived in Ellen's village.

"I swear that I won't put a foot on that damn bus again, driven by the same devil!" said Lily, pointing at the Knight Bus.

"I just don't get it, the ride was fine...well, whatever, welcome to Godric's Hollow," Ellen said.

"That ride was fine what you are talkin-whoa, Ellen this is beautiful!"

Then she thought that the rest of the summer wasn't going to be all that bad.


That was the first chappie I have the 2nd chapter already as soon asI have reviews I will update so Review please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!