This story was completely corrected (probably) as of September 21, 2008, upon a very old decision and very special request. Nothing has been changed. Even awkward repetitions remain in order to maintain everything that my readers liked to begin with. I hope that some of you will reread this in the clarity that I originally meant for it to have. This is the first of my old stories that I have properly corrected, and I plan to fix all of them in the future. At the time when I originally wrote this, I was pretty hassled and editing wasn't much of an option. Then procrastination happened. About three years of it, in fact. Anyways, please enjoy this. I spent much time fixing this and I hope that you will appreciate it as much as I am glad to have checked something off on my to-do list.
