HI People! This is my first Pokémon fanfic. Yeah ME! Well I could always use the help with the stories. My FAVE couple in the whole series was the side Characters MAY & DREW! (Yeah might have figures that out by now). Also to all of my other fans my oc's name was finally decided and going to be permanent of Miyuki Heranawa. I haven't been able to go on very much and I will start beginning to update all my stories immediately. I do hope you enjoy this chapter. NOTE: I do listen to music while I write my stories so it might take sometime for me to update.
The weather outside was crackling. Chaos and havoc was everywhere. Tanela looked outside and knew that today was her last day of life. The legendaries were fighting and only Tanela could stop them. She looked at her baby one last time and said goodbye," My dear Miyuki I am so sorry. You will have to begin your journey of life without me. I will miss you terribly and I will think of you often in heaven," as tears were rolling down her face. She kissed her baby's forehead and left the will and pure green emeralds were placed around her neck. It was in the shape of the "Journey". It was a very a line with one wave. The emeralds decreased in size as the necklace ended. When Tanela was deep in thought Norman and Caroline entered the room. They were very close friends of Tanela and helped her often.
Norman and Caroline were Maple watched the Mother as she walked away. May was born and in her chamber sleeping. Tanela turned around and walked to the couple. She was depressed but knew there was no other way. "You 2 have taken care of me well. I am in your dept and would like to pay it now as of now. I can not thank you enough of taking care of Miyuki when I'm gone. To pay my dept I will grant a wish to both of you. My powers will instantly transfer to my daughter when I pass. Please help her," the mother spoke sternly.
"We would like for May to have the same powers as Miyuki so they may help each other for they will become good friends" the father replied.
"Also, I want May to one day find a love that will be perfect for her. No matter how impossible it may be. I don't want her to be alone when she grows up. I want her to have love like humans though. Find someone, go through heartbreak, but in the end find the one for her," added the mother, Caroline.
"Of course, I completely understand. I shall grant them immediately. Here is also a gift, a will and papers for you to presume the position of guardians over Miyuki. Farewell my friends and take care. I will miss you deeply," tears running down her eyes as she saw them. An aura swirled around Tanela it started to glow. Then it stopped. In another room May was glowing. It died out and she was still asleep. Tanela walked out of the house. She floated off the ground and used all of her power and sent the legendary Pokémon back to their home. Tanela then started to sparkle and materialize into dust flowing in the wind. The last words she whispered before her death was this. "Goodbye my sweet Miyuki, take care. May, Norman, Caroline, good luck," and she then she closed her eyes before turning completely to dust.
Yes I know the Prologe was sad. I have written the other chapter so after a couple of reviews I'll post it A.S.A.P.
Oh yeah here are my questions.
Should I have the characters doing a little comedy talk before the story continues for comedy?
What are other big flying Pokémon other than flygon. Ones that you could ride?
What do you think of this story?
