Hello. So, for a background, my language arts teacher wanted the class to create a new scenario for the Lord of the Flies, which I happily did and went overboard for. She was proud of my work and said that other people should see it. So here I am. Please critic or comment, for I am open to both.

For disclosures, I do NOT own the Lord of the Flies; which means none of the characters that are original to the book, and because it is technically sort-of close to the actual plot, I don't own that either.