Hi! This is my first Eragon Fanfic so here it goes

Eragon was finally at Ellesm'era, the city of the elves. After a very long voyage he was finally here. On the voyage all he had to do was spar with Arya, getting better each time but always losing, and stare at her. Saphira didn't approve of this but Eragon was so enchanted by her he didn't care.

But, back to Ellesm'era. He was lead into a hall created by ivory, gold, and precious gems. He was amazed by the architecture. He wanted to stay there longer ,but Eragon was told by a muscular guard with long black hair to move.

"Arya, have you ever been here before?" Eragon asked in a mere whispher.

"I'am elf aren't I?" She replied. Eragon questioned no further feeling stupid. They were lead through a series of tunnels. To a Hall like the first , but more embellished. It also had a large set of doors at the end.

Saphira I think that's the throne room! He said through his mind to her.

You're on a roll today. Eragon finally decided not talk to females ever again because clearly they were smarter than him. But a sound drew Eragon out of his own thoughts. A wailing was heard coming from the throne room. Then sorrow full screams.

"What do you mean you found the corpse of her horse? Are you telling me my daughter is dead!" Eragon was going to ask Arya if that was the queen, but just decided it was so he wouldn't make a fool of himself.

I know it's short but do you think I should keep going? Pleez Review with de' answer. Thankies! MistWolfWarrior