Hello, People! I'm a new writer, but don't hold back any criticism and feedback. I kind of need them, actually.
"Umm...Hold on a second. I'll call Granny Relda over." Sabrina said, smiling cautiously at the stranger standing at the door.
"Don't worry about it." He said, flashing a smile at her. "I'll just wait."
"Right." Sabrina muttered. Like I'll trust you. She stepped away from the door for a second to yell for her grandmother, making sure to keep an eye on the boy. There was no answer from inside the house, and her voice echoed around for a second. But then quick footsteps sounded on the stairs, and a little girl with a head of brown hair slammed the door open. She stood panting in the doorway for a second, and then bit down on her hand.
"Peter Pan?" She shrieked, doing a little dance of joy. "The Peter Pan? Where's Tinkerbell? And the Lost Boys?"
"Oh, still in Neverland." The boy replied, leaning against the doorframe with a shrug and a smirk. "I got bored of them. But then I heard about this place- What's it called? Porkville?"
"Ferryport Landing." Sabrina corrected, scowling. Who would come to a town without knowing its name? And how could he mix 'Pokville' and 'Ferryport Landing,' up?
"Right. Ferryport Landing. Anyway, I heard about the awesome stuff that's been going on around here. Like that giant that smashed though this town a few weeks ago? Epic!"
"We were almost crushed by that giant." Sabrina snapped, starting to understand the new boy.
"GRIIMM! I BROKE THE OLD LADY!"
All three of them looked back as another boy flew through the door that opened to the stairs. His eyes were wide, and he looked panicked.
"What do you mean, 'You broke Granny Relda'?" Sabrina demanded, already running towards the stairs.
"She was trying to make me take a bath, and then- Pan?"
"Puck? What are you doing here?"
Sabrina almost growled as she caught Puck's elbow and dragged him back up the stairs.
"What did you do to Granny Relda, Puck?"
"Why is Pan here?"
"Who cares? Where's Granny Relda?"
"Oh. Tied up and unconscious, I think. In the for- "
"Unconscious?"
"She was trying to make me take a bath!"
Instead of punching the fairy, Sabrina threw open Puck's door and marched inside.
"Go back and stay with Daphne. I don't trust that Pan guy." Sabrina commanded. Puck scowled at her, and looked like he was about to protest, but then he smiled and flew away.
"Don't you dare break anything!" Sabrina called after him, debating whether or not it was a good idea to leave Puck alone with his archenemy. But remembering Granny Relda, she turned back to his room. A few chimps stood to the side, watching the scene.
"Take me to Granny. Now."
The chimps tittered for a bit, but then started up a hill towards the forest. Sabrina followed, deciding to trust them, for once. They led her through the forest to a clearing. Sabrina scowled. I know Puck doesn't like being clean, but this time, didn't he go a little bit too-
Her grand mother sat in the middle on the clearing, tied up, but very much conscious.
"Oh, liebling! I'm afraid-"
A huge bucket of slop emptied itself on Sabrina's head, setting off the chimps and making them dance around. Grandmother and granddaughter stared at each other for a few seconds.
"I'm going to kill him." Sabrina vowed.
"Now, now, liebling. He's only playing with you."
Sabrina murderously wiped most of the slop off her face, and then headed towards her grand mother to free her. She tripped over a convenient something that stretched across her path, and fell... into a pool of mud. She pushed herself up enough to clear her mouth from the sludge on the ground, shaking in fury. She'd been careful and on guard for weeks, but she never expected him to use his dear "old lady" as bait for his pranks. She took a moment to appreciate the fact that Puck was heartless, then screamed:
"PUCK! YOU ARE DEAD!"
But then she heard a small explosion shake the house, and remembered their guest.
"Oh no." She muttered, wiping some mud off and standing up.
Ten minutes of struggling with the ropes, trudging past the chimps (who were still laughing their heads off), and then making their way downstairs later, the duo emerged onto a war scene.
The kitchen was covered in unidentifiable layers of stuff that Sabrina didn't really want to identify.
"My kitchen!" Granny Relda gasped. They heard voices coming from outside, and Sabrina crossed quickly across the room to open their front door in time to get slathered with the contents of a flying water balloon.
"PUCK!" Sabrina shrieked after making sure to clear her mouth of the stuff.
"As awesome as that was, that wasn't me."
Sabrina proceeded to wipe off the many layers of disgusting things that covered her face so she could actually see what all of the noise was about.
"Sabrina! It's awesome! Puck and Pan are having a prank war!"
Sabrina turned to see her little sister perched on the grass nearby with a a grin that was only marred by the layers of goo that covered her.
"Daphne!" She exclaimed, studying her. The girl seemed to realize what her sister was concerned about, and looked down.
"This stuff is chocolate." Daphne said giddily, licking a finger. "Peter Pan has these water balloons filled with stuff, too!"
After a second, she added. "Except I think you're covered in mud."
"Puck. How many times have I told you? No pranks in the house! Especially the kitchen!" Granny Rela reprimanded, giving her best intimidating look to the fairy flying above her head.
"But that wasn't me!" Puck protested. "It was that guy!"
While he'd been distracted, a balloon few towards him and exploded into something pink.
"PAN!"
And so began the long stay of yet another character in Ferryport Landing.
