Hey guys! It's been an while, but I'm back! I guess XD So I pimped up my OC Susan, below you can read who she really is! Hope you guys like it. Its maybe not so very good cuz I'm Dutch XD So, enjoy! No flames please, but if you can help me! Please help me XD Tell me how I can make it better, I'll do anything for my readers!


OC:

Name: Susan Hook.

Nickname(s): Suzy, The runaway kid

Age: 16.

Date of Birth: July 20th

Gender: Female.

Eye Color: Crystal Blue

Hair Color: Black short.

Clothes: White shirt, Black vest, Black gloves, Black boots.

Weapon: Butterfly Knives.

Mutated: No

Strong Points: Fearless, Strong, Brave.

Weak Points: Temper, Jealousy, Feels Lonely.

Susan's Story:

Susan was born in the streets of New York City, her parents weren't really happy with having her. So that they did was awful, they left her on the streets, an little baby, just born. Someone found her on the streets, an poor woman. She could only take care of Susan for 7 years, then sadly the poor woman died and Susan needed to live with an family, and an horrible sister. She didn't really hang out there… When she turned 15, she met an street gang, also known as the Purple Dragons. They guys gave her the right clothes, learned her to fight with butterfly knives, and how to survive on her own. Xever, was her master. He trained her into being just like her, an thief. After one year she was done with the guys, so she started to find out who she really was. Because of all the jobs she did in that one year, she had enough money to buy an small building and to buy enough food. It was for her all she needed. But the purple dragons wanted revenge, from that moment she started hiding from them and turned into one of the big enemies from the foot clan, known as The Runaway Kid. After an while she even could go to school, where she met Ellamore. Not like she went to school a lot, she was an fighter, and not an learner. She looked good, she had an place to stay, and she was ready for the world. When she met the turtles together with Ellamore, it was an shock, but she already knew she had an connection with Raphael. She felt like they were the same. Being part of the good guys is new for her, but with some training from Raph and Splinter, she knows how to handle it pretty well.


On the roofs of New York City, Raphael is running with an bouquet of roses. He was going to see his crush again. He is really excited to see her again, she is the one he loves and cares about. Why? Because she is the only one who gets him, who understands him. And he is so glad about that. There she was, standing on their roof, twirling her butterfly knives in her hands. He knows her past, she used to be an purple dragon, trained by his arch enemy Xever. That's why he doesn't want to tell his brothers about her, the reason why he keeps her an secret. She saw him and smiled. "Hey there, turtle boy!" He smiled at her and jumped on her roof, looking at her. "Nice to see you again Suzy, I got something for ya." He took the flowers from his back and showed them to her. "Happy anniversary, sweet heart. " Susan smiled brightly and gave him an hug and took the roses. They have been together for 1 month now, it was something great "Raph, you're really sweet, you know that?" He smiled and shrugged. "I'll try, it's not really what I do but, your my girl, you deserve it. " They sat down on the edge of the roof, telling stories, eating pizza, something they do every week on Wednesday and Saturday. "I got something for you too.." She took something out of her bag, it was necklace. She had two of them, one for her, and one for him. "It's means were connected, I know you can't fight with it, or even wear it when your brothers are there… but I just wanted to buy it for you…" Raph smiled and took it with pride. "I love it, your awesome Suzy." "So are you, Raph." When they were talking, Slash was running around on the roofs, in allays, on the streets, just running and looking for his old friend, Raph. He wants revenge on his brothers, so he can have Raph as his partner, they need to fight together. He ran on the roofs and suddenly something interesting came into his view. Raphael, sitting on an roof with an girl. Slash saw how he put the necklace around Susan her neck, and how she gave him an kiss on his cheek. Slash hands turned into fists. 'He forgotten so soon about me…. Oh I will get him for this!' Slash thought and ran away from them, he needs to think of an plan. After an while, it was time for Raph and Susan to go home. "I will see you Saturday… Same place, same time. Like usual!" She said to him and gave him an sweet kiss, they did that a lot of times now. Kissing each other. They turned out to be an great couple, only they had their issues. Raph couldn't stop thinking about the first time when he met her, she was running away from the purple dragons.

/Flashback/

"Go AWAY! " She ran, and ran as fast as she could, she ran through allays until she came into an dead end. She turned around, and there they were. Fong and his gang of losers. "You're coming with us, sweetheart! You should never have betrayed us!" He approached her and grabbed her by her arm. She struggled and tried to get free, she was so sorry that she didn't bring her butterfly knives with her that day. "I think she doesn't want to go with you." Suddenly behind Fong, there was Raph. And he was ready to kick, butt! Susan looked at him with wide eyes, what was he? Raph then grabbed Fong by his collar and he let go of Susan. "I'm in an reaaaaly bad mood, so if I were you, I wouldn't have done this!" Raph then punched Fong in the face and kicked the other two in the nuts. "Now GET LOST!" Tsoi and Sid ran away as fast as they could, with an knocked Fong in their arms. Raph watched them ran away, and was forgotten about the girl he just saved. "Thanks for that…" He then turned around and looked at Susan. "Uh.. yeah.. your welcome, I guess…" He was surprised she didn't ran away, it wasn't something he saw every day. "I think I'm getting out of shape, those guys haven't been after me for an while now.." "Why are they after you? Why are you so special?" She crossed her arms and rolled her eyes before looking at him. "No one ever told you about the runaway kid?" He then remembered he did heard of it, the one that ran away from the purple dragons. "Yeah, why?" She smiled and put out her hand . "I'm Susan, also known as, the runaway kid… Nice to meet you." He looked at her hand, was she joking? When he looked at her smile he knew she wasn't. He took her hand and shacked it. "Raphael, call me Raph…. Nice to meet you too…" After that they started talking more, and after an while… they fell in love with each other. It was just what Raph needed… an girl.

/Flashback over/

Raph still smiled brightly, he knew she was perfect for him. And he was so right. "See you later Raph." She then jumped of the roof on the fire escape and then into the alley, her house was close. He always followed her until she was home. He just wanted her to be save, she is his girl after all. Then when he saw her sneaking into her room, he went to an manhole cover to his lair. Because it was late, he always needed to sneak in. And in the morning, he was as tired as can be. When he walked into the lair, he saw everyone was asleep already. He walked to his room, but before he could open the door, he heard some noises coming from behind him. There stood Leonardo, his big brother. "Where were you all night? " He had his arms crossed over his chest and he looked serious. "What do you mean, I was just here?" Raph tried to hide it, if Leo knew that his girl was an old purple dragon member, it was over! "I saw you coming into the lair, where were you?" Raph opened his door to his room and went inside. "I was… just getting some fresh air.. I couldn't sleep and now I can so… goodnight!" He said before he closed the door behind him and then sighed when he heard Leo walk away. "That was an close one…" He said to himself before laying down on the bed, looking at the necklace his girl gave him. "Night Suzy…" He smiled and fell asleep.

Outside Susan her room was someone staring at her window. He knew she was there, he knew what he needed to do, and he know when. "Time for revenge, there is now way back now…" He went to the window and opened it, looking down at the girl, sleeping softly in her bed. He smirked and then went inside. Because of the noise, Susan slowly started to open her eyes and she sat back up straight. "W..what?" Then all of the sudden, chains wrapped around her body and she was getting pulled out of her bed and there before here stood Slash. "Goodnight, sweetheart." That were the last words she heard before she got knocked out by his big club.

~ TO BE CONTINUED! ~