Hello people. Right for any of you who have read my previous stories know that i write about Twilight. THIS IS NOT ME!!! All doctor who stories that will be uploaded onto this page are from my brother. Untill he is able to make a account of his own then they are going to have to go onto my page.
Im not to sure what this story is about to be perfectly honest, he doesnt write about the recent dr, just the old boring ones, so you know

Well if you are interested in the old dr who stuff, then you may like this, but like i said, i didnt write it so i dont know what it is about.
Enjoy!

BTW: dont own any of the Dr who stuff!

The planet Telos is a desolate planet far from many other species within the far corners of the universe and homes one advance race whose original home planet had been destroyed when it had drifted into Earth's atmosphere and this race nears extinction. Until now.

As the mist drifted through the mountains of the planet and a new day dawned with temperatures rising to a minimum degree was when the silence was broken by the sound of an engine noise and as soon as it was silent, a hunched man stoops over the ridge followed by a tall man draped in a long black cloak climbed over the slated mountains.

"Is this the place, master?" the hunched figure asked as lingered back to his follower.

"Of course, you imbecile!" the black cloak man barked back "unlike my enemy's, my TARDIS works, now silence."

He pulls a small device out of the cloak and points it to the sky until a light flashed.

"Excellent, we are nearing the city." And the two men began to clamber across mountains and caverns. After 10 minutes of climbing over rocks and boulders the dark figure held out his arm and pointed across the nearest cavern to something that glittered in the planet's sunlight.

A giant set of silver doors barred with giant statues of what looked like men but not a single emotion was in their stony faces. Before any of them reached them, the man in front grabbed a rock and threw at the doors. As soon as it touched the door, the rock had disintegrated into a million pieces.

"How clever, Doctor." The man sniggers "But not clever enough"

He places a small cube at the very centre of the doors where electrical surges began to arise from the doors and entered the cube. The man quickly removed the cube from the door.

"Now, open the door Klisg" the figure points to his hunched servant and to the door. Reluctantly, he stoops over to the door and with great strength, the doors began to ease open and when the widest gap was made, they walked in.

On the other side of the doors, there was a giant, vast control room. Each wall with its own console except for the wall nearest the door where there was a giant hatch and in the shadow of the now opened doors, lay a great tall figure. It's face covered by the door's mighty height.

"Where to, master?" spoke the man known as Klisg

"I would probably say down there" said the figure, pointing to the closed hatch. "Preferably through these controls." So he walked over to the control opposite the hatch and began to manoeuvre the levers until a wave of cold swept into the room.

The hatch was slowly beginning to open.

"Excellent" said the figure, tightening his cloak "We should be careful, there could be loose ice, so try not to be an idiot." He added to Klisg, The two men descended down a ladder into the vast ice corridors.

A set of corridors met their eyes. All the walls were made of what looked like solid ice with icicles protruding from the ceiling. The tall figure led himself and Klisg through one corridor on the left and they were soon going down a small flight of stairs which soon ended with a large ice archway. Slowly, they crept through it.

"Behold, Klisg" said the man with a wicked grin across his face.

Around the many walls were a number of honeycomb objects that towered to the ceiling, all frozen into the walls and in the corner, stood another set of consoles with wires leading into each of the honeycombs. Klisg lingered up to it.

"We release them, master?" he asked, his hand hovering over a switch.

"No! Not yet." said the man quickly "We wait until the Doctor is here. But first, we need to attract his attention."

From within his cloak, he removed another small cube, but this one was placed into the middle of the floor. The man had also pulled a controller out of his pocket as well. He flicked a switch and the cube had began to open, spider like legs emerged from the opening and linked each other together and a pale blue light was shining from within them.

"What that for, master" Klisg asked confused.

"It is merely a transmatter system" said the man "This will be our means to get the Doctor".

He pulled a small tube from the transmatter, dragged it across the room and inserted it into the console. When that was done, he flicked a switch and a small hole opened at the bottom of the nearest wall. A small beeping noise was coming from within it, the man flicked another switch and about twenty small, metal caterpillars creatures moved slowly out. Klisg raised a threatening fist as if to crush them.

"No, you idiot!" the figure ran in front of Klisg and stopped his falling fist "They are the means of getting to him."

Unconvinced, Klisg lowered his fist and walked into the corner as the man lined the creatures in front of the transmatter and he pulled down a lever on console and (still beeping) the creatures glided towards the blue light emitted from transmattter. One reached the light and at once, it had disappeared with as blink of an eye.

"Perfect" said the man wickedly, soon all the creatures had disappeared. The man pocketed the now closed transmatter and pushed a button on his controller. A small, shrill noise had sounded. Klisg covered his ears, and screamed "What that?"

"It is a distress call" said the man "I've locked onto the same place I sent those creatures. Soon Doctor, We'll both have our revenge." He said nastily glaring at the frozen honeycombs.

About 10,000,000 lightyears, away, the distress indicator sounded within the TARDIS.

Let me know what you think, and if you like, i will get him to upload the second chapter.

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