Alright this is my first fanfiction so please review it. I know these aren't my characters, they are Tamora Pierce's and always will be but I love them so much I had to make my own story with them.
Chapter 1
It was the start of the summer and Kel was on one of her frequent visits to the place.
Keladry, Squire Keladry rode her horse Peachblossom through the outskirts of the royal forest. She was thinking about all that had happened to her in the last few years. Some boys had excepted her others had not, well that couldn't be helped, and Joren, was well Joren and she didn't think she would ever understand him.
Lord Wyldon seemed to have excepted her, but you could never be to certain with the training master. And her friends she now had many friends at court, Neal she thought, she understood her feels toward him better now. She knew the truth, and she knew she loved him. But if their knight masters were to take them apart, she didn't know what she would do.
As she was riding she killed a rabbit as a thank you to Stefan, and when she took it back to the stables he was very grateful.
Kel then wondered into the palace thinking vaguely of going to see Daine. She was just about to turn a corner when she heard arguing not to far away. She hurried towards the sound of the commotion, she came to a small walled courtyard between some palace buildings.
As she peered around the wall she was surprised to see Joren and Neal fighting. She was about to butt in when she heard her own name.
"I know you fancy her Queenscove, I can tell by the way you look at her,"
"What about the way you look at her, maybe you think she'll like you for your looks, if so you'll be sorely disappointed."
"Know that for a fact, Queenscove?" Joren sneered
Kel was still wondering what was going on when Joren spat
"Going to ask the Lump to go to bed with you, she wouldn't, she's bored with your little toys she wants a man."
At this Neal pushed Joren into the dirt and strode off.
Kel could hardly breathe, maybe Neal did fancy her. Oh imagine the man she had wanted privately for years also liked her.
Maybe next time they met and were alone she would try and kiss him to see what he did. But no she would be to scared. She wasn't sure if Neal did fancy her.
It took Kel three days to find Neal but to her it felt like three years. She found him finally in the small courtyard in which he had argued with Joren.
"Hi Neal," said Kel nervously moving out of the shadows. "I thought you would be back in Queenscove by now.
"I might go in a few days but that all depends on what happens here."
"Meaning..."
"I... oh I don't know." They sat in silence for a while, Kel was wondering just how to tell Neal she had loved him for years when Neal looked at her and said "Kel, erm this is hard for me, so don't interrupt when I've started, it will make it a lot harder. Kel I know I always fanaticise about ladies at court, but I've only really loved one person..." he trailed of miserably. Then started again, "I guess what I'm trying to say is erm that well," Neal seemed to be looking for the right words. Kel stared at him for a moment then grabed his face in passion she could not control and kissed him ferociously.
You've got to review this if you want me to write more!
Chapter 1
It was the start of the summer and Kel was on one of her frequent visits to the place.
Keladry, Squire Keladry rode her horse Peachblossom through the outskirts of the royal forest. She was thinking about all that had happened to her in the last few years. Some boys had excepted her others had not, well that couldn't be helped, and Joren, was well Joren and she didn't think she would ever understand him.
Lord Wyldon seemed to have excepted her, but you could never be to certain with the training master. And her friends she now had many friends at court, Neal she thought, she understood her feels toward him better now. She knew the truth, and she knew she loved him. But if their knight masters were to take them apart, she didn't know what she would do.
As she was riding she killed a rabbit as a thank you to Stefan, and when she took it back to the stables he was very grateful.
Kel then wondered into the palace thinking vaguely of going to see Daine. She was just about to turn a corner when she heard arguing not to far away. She hurried towards the sound of the commotion, she came to a small walled courtyard between some palace buildings.
As she peered around the wall she was surprised to see Joren and Neal fighting. She was about to butt in when she heard her own name.
"I know you fancy her Queenscove, I can tell by the way you look at her,"
"What about the way you look at her, maybe you think she'll like you for your looks, if so you'll be sorely disappointed."
"Know that for a fact, Queenscove?" Joren sneered
Kel was still wondering what was going on when Joren spat
"Going to ask the Lump to go to bed with you, she wouldn't, she's bored with your little toys she wants a man."
At this Neal pushed Joren into the dirt and strode off.
Kel could hardly breathe, maybe Neal did fancy her. Oh imagine the man she had wanted privately for years also liked her.
Maybe next time they met and were alone she would try and kiss him to see what he did. But no she would be to scared. She wasn't sure if Neal did fancy her.
It took Kel three days to find Neal but to her it felt like three years. She found him finally in the small courtyard in which he had argued with Joren.
"Hi Neal," said Kel nervously moving out of the shadows. "I thought you would be back in Queenscove by now.
"I might go in a few days but that all depends on what happens here."
"Meaning..."
"I... oh I don't know." They sat in silence for a while, Kel was wondering just how to tell Neal she had loved him for years when Neal looked at her and said "Kel, erm this is hard for me, so don't interrupt when I've started, it will make it a lot harder. Kel I know I always fanaticise about ladies at court, but I've only really loved one person..." he trailed of miserably. Then started again, "I guess what I'm trying to say is erm that well," Neal seemed to be looking for the right words. Kel stared at him for a moment then grabed his face in passion she could not control and kissed him ferociously.
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