Hi people! Well this was my first fanfic ever and was posted on my friends account because I was to scared to use my own. I went back and read it the other day and realised how bad it was. So hence the revised version. It may not be brilliant but it is defiantly better! Anyways I hope this re-worked version doesn't bore you and you tell me if you have any questions, concerns or comments! JCCx
Chapter 1
EPOV
Life was perfect, I was finally complete. I sat on the floor (which was covered with blankets and pillows) of the Cullen's lounge with my siblings and my amazing girlfriend on my lap. I had my arms around Bella's waist and was resting my head on her shoulder. Her warmth radiated like the sun and her scent cascaded onto me. It drove me insane but I would not have it any other way. I could enjoy the bouquet without tasting the wine.
We were watching Dracula. The movie with the crazy costumes and miniature sets. We all couldn't stop laughing as the actors tried to portray a vampire. It was the furthest thing from the truth but also extremely entertaining.
"Oh come on!...How old does that guy look?" Emmett asked pointing at the screen.
He was on the wide couch with Rosalie lying in front of him. He had an arm around her waist, pulling her against his chest. Rosalie looked like she was bored, but occasionally she would grunt or laugh at the film.
"Sorry put I am more distracted by his hair!" Jasper said fighting building laughs. He was lying on the floor as well, holding Alice's hand.
"And three wives ...come on! This just makes us look ridiculous." Emmett shouted again, he was enjoying this. He usually liked watching these types of films; just to make fun of how wrong they were, and he didn't spare people's feelings either.
I didn't really watch the movie. I was playing absentmindedly with Bella's chocolate-brown hair. She would occasionally laugh at one of Emmett's comments or at just how down right ridiculous the movie was. I loved to watch her smile; it reminded me of how lucky I was, and watching her happy in turn had the same effect on me.
Carlisle and Esme had gone hunting tonight; they wanted to leave us to do our own thing seeing as Bella was staying with us. Alice had convinced Charlie to let her stay with us (well Alice, apparently I wasn't here). Alice was taking Bella shopping tomorrow, much to Bella's dismay. She wanted to stay here or anywhere as long as it wasn't at a mall with Alice and money. I didn't know why she hated people spending money on her; I would love to spoil her. She deserved it. Also, we would be married one day so what is mine will be hers, why not just start that a little early?
Bella snuggled closer to my chest and her warmth engulfed me. I was no longer in the shadows; the sun was shinning on me. She was my light, my love and my life. The thought of spending one minute without her at my side, to return to the eternal night was enough to send me over the edge.
We continued to watch the movie and Bella and my family kept laughing. I could never get enough of the sound of her laugh; I adored this part of Bella. She was happy, carefree and comfortable. My Bella was a member of our family and fit in perfectly. Her beautiful personality balanced out our traits nicely. Not to mention she was the missing link in my life.
Then everything changed. Alice had the vision.
Her face went blank and she sat up abruptly.
"Bella!" She sounded petrified, and her thoughts were incoherent. But I didn't need Alice's gift to know what was going to happen. Bella fell back onto me, her face blank and Alice screamed.
Ok let me know what you think! JCCx
