Okay i'm uploading this story again because i read it again while adding a few things and i think that this might be the best story that i may have done with one new addition to it 'Jet' A 15 year old girl. No this has nothing to do with Skyver just a new character.
Those who have read the story beforehand will know what goes on but its wise to re-read it 1. To refresh your memory and 2. it's better, hopefully.
This is the first time in weeks that i have actually decided that now is the time to get some action into your lives and do some uploading, along with an unfinished manga that i'm starting. I hope that you like the story so with out further ado read on
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This is a true story about a girl whose love for one of the Saint shields is soon broken for another in an instant heartbeat.
Jet, a 15-year-old girl, was enjoying her beybattle with the local kids in the park in Japan. " I have you now, go Raven" said Jet ordering her bitbeast. Her blade did a turn and rammed into the side of the other beyblade, which shot out of the stadium and crash landed beside her opponents feet. " Not too bad, you need a little more practice, try a heavier weight disk and a smaller attack ring" answered Jet. " Thanks, I will' smiled the boy and ran of towards the beyblade hobby shop. She turned to leave. " Aw Jet are you going?" " Please stay" " Teach me a few things". " Sorry I'm not an experienced beyblader like the Bladebreakers" explained Jet, as she waved to them then disappeared.
What the young teen hadn't notice was that she was being watched closely by a pair of green eyes, following her every move. Hiding behind a building close by was a boy, about her age, in a brown cloak, his face was hidden inside the hood and you could only see his green pupiless eyes. " That Jet is good all most to good with that bitbeast of her's. Time for some fun and see what she really is like" he said and with that disappeared into the shadows.
Jet was walking down an alleyway that lead to her home. " My lady, I feel an unwanted presence nearby, probably following us" spoke her bit beast. " What are you on about Raven?" she asked. Raven came out of the blade in a chibi-like form. " I don't know my lady I know that they is someone is out here watching your every move, I can feel it" answered Raven.
" That is strange, I think. Can you get a reading on whom it might be?" asked Jet. Raven shook his head. " Sorry my lady I can't I'm Sorry to have disappointed you" He bowed in shame. Jet stoked her beloved bit beast soflty. " It's okay Raven, we will soon find out who this perplex is"
She got to her door when a beyblade came out of no-where and chipped the door frame. Jet launched her beyblade and went after it. Both beyblades collided and flew back to their owners. Jet watched as the other beyblade fell into the hands of a young boy.
" My lady that's the one who I couldn't get the reading off" growled Raven. " Thank you Raven" she replied. Raven bowed and disappeared into her blade.
" Who are you and what are you doing trespassing on my property?" scowled Jet. The boy laughed and jumped down from the gate roof. " The name is Ozuma, and I want to have a little beybattle with you since I heard that your the best around here" he said.
" Why me? I'm not that good" asked Jet. Raven sniggered in his bit chip. " I've seen you beybattle that boy today in the park, and your pretty good. I'm guessing that you have a bit beast and I want to see how really good you are against a real blader like me!" explained Ozuma.
Jet smiled and pulled out a launcher and her beyblade again. " Okay I'm ready when ever you are, but I have to warn you cannot defeat my bit beast, " warned Jet. " I can feel a powerful bitbeast within his blade, who are you?" thought Raven.
They both launched their beyblades into the beystadium. The beyblades spun around colliding into each other. " You really think you can win?" laughed Jet. " Wait and see I have a few tricks up my sleeve so prepare yourself to be taught a valued lesson" replied Ozuma.
Ozuma's beyblade stopped, backtracked and rammed into Jet's blade. Her blade flew up in the air and landed back into the dish. " Give up?" smirked Ozuma. Jet laughed. " No chance I'm just getting started RAVEN!" Her beyblade started to glow and a shape of a raven came out of the bit chip. Ozuma stared at the Raven bit beast in its full form. " Wow I never seen a bit beast like this one before" gawped Ozuma.
Both beyblades circled around the dish. Raven flew down and attacked Ozuma's blade making it wobble. " I had enough of this child's play" growled Ozuma " Flash leopard attack!" Ozuma's beyblade lit up and out came his bit beast. " So that's who you are, no problem" smiled Raven.
Jet was laughing. " You think that you can beat me with a cute bitbeast? ATTACK!". Raven nodded then backtracked and rammed into Flash Leopard and sent it flying into the air. Ozuma's blade landed back in the dish but then slowed down and then it stopped spinning.
Ozuma picked up his blade and passed Jet a cold look. " You just got lucky, for an amateur for having such a weak bit beast, and a really cute amateur as well" replied Ozuma. " Whom are you calling an amateur? I'm just as good as any other blader!" scowled Jet blushing. " Yeah what ever you say, just you wait till next time I will beat you long and hard" said Ozuma and left.
The next day Jet was out trying to get information about Ozuma. After a long day she didn't have much luck until she got home. On the table near the door was a letter addressed to her. She picked it up and opened it. Inside was a letter, it read ' To Jet, you had it lucky today now you will pay for insulting my bit beast and me. You will regret this. Come to the old warehouse at the harbour tomorrow at 8:00, come if you dare be defeated by me'.
Raven came out of the beyblade and sat on his master's table. " My lady do you think it's wise to have another battle with this perplex?" he asked. " Raven I'm only going to teach him a lesson again, and I don't want you to interfere with the battle this time, please" explained Jet. Raven dropped his head in disappointment to his master. " I understand my lady, I shall not interfere with your battle, but I shall watch" he said.
Jet put the letter down and smiled. " Don't worry Raven I still love you, you're a truly loyal friend to me" Raven smiled and hopped onto Jet's open arm. " Okay you're on, wait till I kick your arse again. No one can defeat my bit beast Raven"
This is going to end up being an Jet/Ozuma fic so brace yourselves because all that is going to change in later chapters, this is one ride you don't want to get off. Rape, sex, love and tragety mix them together and what do you get? Disaster!.
Jet's bitbeast is a giant Raven in full form and a miniture chibi virsion when he is out of her beyblade.
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