tis is new version of story here after Eternity Swod becum my beta thx for helping me spell!


The weather was very cold because it was winter time. Florianna Fastasa Serenity was walking down the road and was very cold. She was looking for the Hogwarts Castle in the middle of the city because she had been chosen to become the castle's maid. She walked and walked and soon she get there. The guards opened the door for her.

"Thank you," she said politely and the guards smiled at her. She felt good after that. Just then she met a tall and stern looking maid with red hair, who made her feel small. Still, Flora greeted her politely.

"Who are you?" she demanded and Flora was shocked.

"Who are you?" Flora asked sadly.

"I am Ginny Blackheart," she said menacingly. "We don't want you here."

Flora didn't know why Ginny was so mean at her. After all, she was invited here to be a maid! She was scared. Just then, a man with black hair came down the stairs.

"It is prince harry," someone announced. Everyone gasped and bowed.

Harry was a very handsome person. Flora was surprised. Harry said to Ginny, "stop doing this to her. I was the one who invited her here." Flora blushed. Ginny was angry.
"B-but you are the headmaster's heir, Harry," she said. "and we're engaged!"

"I am engaged to no one," said Harry, "begone, Ginny before I force you out."

Ginny ran away.

"How can I repay you?" said Flora.

"Just be here forever and ever," breathed Harry.