Okay, so I was really unhappy with the ending of Allegiant, and I'm sure most of you were too. I thought I'd try to rewrite it...

Tobias's POV

I wake up on the floor of the fear simulation room. How'd I get here? I've been outside the fence for a couple years now. I'm still not over Tris though. I think about her every day. Someone grabs my shoulder and pulls me over. I look up and see.. Tris?

"Tobias, you were in your fear landscape a while, what happened?" she says.
"What!? Tris, you're dead! I saw you! You were on the table in the morgue, I spread your ashes on the zip-line, how are you here? Wait, am I dead?" I ramble before she cuts me off.

"Tobias, you were in your fear landscape. None of that was real, I'm here, and I'm perfectly alive."

"But, the government, and the genetic damage. None of that was real?"
"No. I've never heard of any of that."

"Tris, that was over two years of my life. How was it not real? How long was I in there?"

"Twenty minutes. That's the longest you've ever been in there."
"But.. It felt so real. I'm always aware during simulations. Or maybe I'm not amymore because I'm not really Divergent."
"Well I watched you on the screens, and you never really got over it, so the simulation continued. I finally decided to shut it off, I hated seeing you so upset. And you are Divergent, that was just part of the fear landscape."
"Tris.. How many fears did I have?"
"Oddly enough, it was still four. 1. Leaving the city and going to the "government" or whatever it was 2. Me liking another guy, the one named Matthew 3. You not being Divergent 4. Me dying."

"But I'm still claustrophobic, and scared of heights, why were those fears not in the simulation?"
"Maybe because these fears are worse? Come on, lets go back up to the room, you look like you need some sleep."

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