A/N: My first fanfiction so criticize if you feel the need to. I want your opinion. Set at the end of Twilight.
Disclaimer: I do not own anything.
Chapter 1: The Change.
I was in unbearable pain, but now wasn't a time I thought about myself. Edward lingered in my mind and heart. I wish he was here but at the same time I didn't. He couldn't see me like this, so broken and hurt. It would devastate him, and I would be the cause.
I felt James' cool breath on my hand and, I closed my eyes tight with anticipation. As soon as I felt his teeth bite at my skin a sudden urge of power went through me. I could feel myself healing in mere milliseconds. My leg and head began to heal instantly and at that moment I felt invincible.
James staggered back in astonishment. "H-how?" He asked in disbelief. In that moment I didn't question what this was but I took the opportunity to save myself. I started to stand, and in seconds I had him pinned and was ripping him of his flesh. "You tried to kill me and hurt the ones I loved. This is your only consequence- death." I shot out venomously. He began to thrash back, to my surprise, and knocked my into the glass, again, but, I didn't feel a thing. I felt powerful. I went to attack but he was already pinned to the floor but Emmett and Jasper.
I was tackled in a loving hug by the only person I wanted to see at that moment: Edward. I was so incredibly happy to see I began to weep but, my tears were only imaginary and never left my mind.
My thoughts began to reel. How I couldn't cry. How I mended so easily. It was impossible for a human but, I didn't think I was a human any more. Edward looked over my shoulder and spoke to Carlisle, "I think she is changing."
Carlisle replied, "I think she has changed."
A/N: So what do you think? Is it good enough to continue?
