Concrete Angel
One shot possibly duo is 16 Katsie is 15 time will tell weather I keep writing or even continue this. Disclaimer I do not own any gundam pilot or the song concrete angel
She walks to school with the lunch she packed
Nobody knows what she's holdin' back
A black haired girl bumped into a braided brow haired boy on their way to school.
Wearin' the same dress she wore yesterday
Her ice blue eyes were dull and she was pale. The boy looked at her his violet eyes filled with worry "Hey what's wrong?" he reached for the girl's shoulders.
She hides the bruises with linen and lace
She screamed when he touched her, with pain and fear in the scream "Hey calm down. I'm not going to hurt you." The girl calmed down. "Come on fallow me. By the way my name is Duo what is your name?" "K...Katsie" "Come on Katsie lets get to school."
The teacher wonders but she doesn't ask
Katsie and Duo walked in just as the bell rang. The teacher watched them sit and then began the lesson.
It's hard to see the pain behind the mask
As she sat Katsie winced in pain and tried not to let the tears run down her face but they did any way.
Bearing the burden of a secret storm
Duo watched her cry and rubbed her back lightly. She winced. The class bell rang everyone left and Dou walked Katsie home
Sometimes she wishes she was never born
Duo and Katsie went to the park and sat at a bench "Duo I don't want to live any more it hurts too much." "Come on just keep living for me .OK."
"Ok Duo" Katsie smiled.
Through the wind and the rain
She stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
Katsie rested her head on Duo's shoulder. Duo rested his head on hers. They both smiled slightly.
But her dreams give her wings
And she flies to a place where she's loved
Duo lifted up his head than used his fingers to lift up Katsie's head. She was still smiling so was he.
Concrete angel
They leaned in and kissed. Duo's tongue slid over Katsie's lip she opened her mouth. They enjoyed a few bliss filled seconds and when the separated they noticed it was dark. Katsie's eyes were filled with fear. They ran home (Duo lives across the street).
Somebody cries in the middle of the night
The neighbors hear, but they turn out the lights
Duo heard Katsie's screams. He had always wondered who was screaming when
he moved here "Come on Dad let's call the cops." "No Son we can't do anything" "But Dad they are hurting Katsie" "Duo sweetie come here" "Mom" "I'm sorry honey there's nothing we can do" "now go to bed" Duo walked into
his room and turned the lights off.
A fragile soul caught in the hands of fate
When morning comes it'll be too late
Duo was laying on his bed in his room. He heard the door slam across the street "Katsie I hope your ok."
Through the wind and the rain
She stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
Duo hasn't seen Katsie for a few days. A man came into the class one day and started to talk to the teacher "Duo come here" "coming" "Go out in the hall with this man and if you want you can go home afterward OK." "Okay"
But her dreams give her wings
And she flies to a place where she's loved
"Young man are you Katsie's best friend" "No sir" "But the teacher said you were" "I'm not her best friend I'm her boy friend" "OK well son..."
Concrete angel
"Well son I'm sorry she died a few days ago." "But how?" Duo's eyes started to water "Katsie was beaten to death I'm sorry" Duo collapsed to his knees "Katsie no please no" "Son would you like a ride home" "No Katsie would want me to finish class" "OK Son" Dou walked back into the classroom "You ok Duo" "Yeah Quatre I'm fine"
A statue stands in a shaded place
An angel girl with an upturned face
"Duo honey eat please and come to the funeral with us please" "Fine mother I don't really want to but I will go for Katsie."
A name is written on a polished rock
A broken heart that the world forgot
Dou started walking to the casket but didn't look in. "Oh Katsie I'm sorry I couldn't protect you."
Through the wind and the rain
She stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
Duo kneeled down and started crying and praying. When he stoped he stayed for a few minutes "Katsie I love you and always will."
But her dreams give her wings
And she flies to a place where she's loved
"Come on son stand up and look her in the face." "Ok Dad." As Duo stood up he was saying "I love you Katsie over and over again he stood up and looked at Katsie.
Concrete angel
"MomDadIt'snotKatsie.Katsiedidn'tdiethisissomeoneelse." "Son hold on calm down and breath now say it again but slowly this time" "Mom Dad It's not Katsie. Katsie didn't die this is someone else."
Please review I'm a first time writer and I'm worried about how this turned out and let me know if I should continue
One shot possibly duo is 16 Katsie is 15 time will tell weather I keep writing or even continue this. Disclaimer I do not own any gundam pilot or the song concrete angel
She walks to school with the lunch she packed
Nobody knows what she's holdin' back
A black haired girl bumped into a braided brow haired boy on their way to school.
Wearin' the same dress she wore yesterday
Her ice blue eyes were dull and she was pale. The boy looked at her his violet eyes filled with worry "Hey what's wrong?" he reached for the girl's shoulders.
She hides the bruises with linen and lace
She screamed when he touched her, with pain and fear in the scream "Hey calm down. I'm not going to hurt you." The girl calmed down. "Come on fallow me. By the way my name is Duo what is your name?" "K...Katsie" "Come on Katsie lets get to school."
The teacher wonders but she doesn't ask
Katsie and Duo walked in just as the bell rang. The teacher watched them sit and then began the lesson.
It's hard to see the pain behind the mask
As she sat Katsie winced in pain and tried not to let the tears run down her face but they did any way.
Bearing the burden of a secret storm
Duo watched her cry and rubbed her back lightly. She winced. The class bell rang everyone left and Dou walked Katsie home
Sometimes she wishes she was never born
Duo and Katsie went to the park and sat at a bench "Duo I don't want to live any more it hurts too much." "Come on just keep living for me .OK."
"Ok Duo" Katsie smiled.
Through the wind and the rain
She stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
Katsie rested her head on Duo's shoulder. Duo rested his head on hers. They both smiled slightly.
But her dreams give her wings
And she flies to a place where she's loved
Duo lifted up his head than used his fingers to lift up Katsie's head. She was still smiling so was he.
Concrete angel
They leaned in and kissed. Duo's tongue slid over Katsie's lip she opened her mouth. They enjoyed a few bliss filled seconds and when the separated they noticed it was dark. Katsie's eyes were filled with fear. They ran home (Duo lives across the street).
Somebody cries in the middle of the night
The neighbors hear, but they turn out the lights
Duo heard Katsie's screams. He had always wondered who was screaming when
he moved here "Come on Dad let's call the cops." "No Son we can't do anything" "But Dad they are hurting Katsie" "Duo sweetie come here" "Mom" "I'm sorry honey there's nothing we can do" "now go to bed" Duo walked into
his room and turned the lights off.
A fragile soul caught in the hands of fate
When morning comes it'll be too late
Duo was laying on his bed in his room. He heard the door slam across the street "Katsie I hope your ok."
Through the wind and the rain
She stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
Duo hasn't seen Katsie for a few days. A man came into the class one day and started to talk to the teacher "Duo come here" "coming" "Go out in the hall with this man and if you want you can go home afterward OK." "Okay"
But her dreams give her wings
And she flies to a place where she's loved
"Young man are you Katsie's best friend" "No sir" "But the teacher said you were" "I'm not her best friend I'm her boy friend" "OK well son..."
Concrete angel
"Well son I'm sorry she died a few days ago." "But how?" Duo's eyes started to water "Katsie was beaten to death I'm sorry" Duo collapsed to his knees "Katsie no please no" "Son would you like a ride home" "No Katsie would want me to finish class" "OK Son" Dou walked back into the classroom "You ok Duo" "Yeah Quatre I'm fine"
A statue stands in a shaded place
An angel girl with an upturned face
"Duo honey eat please and come to the funeral with us please" "Fine mother I don't really want to but I will go for Katsie."
A name is written on a polished rock
A broken heart that the world forgot
Dou started walking to the casket but didn't look in. "Oh Katsie I'm sorry I couldn't protect you."
Through the wind and the rain
She stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
Duo kneeled down and started crying and praying. When he stoped he stayed for a few minutes "Katsie I love you and always will."
But her dreams give her wings
And she flies to a place where she's loved
"Come on son stand up and look her in the face." "Ok Dad." As Duo stood up he was saying "I love you Katsie over and over again he stood up and looked at Katsie.
Concrete angel
"MomDadIt'snotKatsie.Katsiedidn'tdiethisissomeoneelse." "Son hold on calm down and breath now say it again but slowly this time" "Mom Dad It's not Katsie. Katsie didn't die this is someone else."
Please review I'm a first time writer and I'm worried about how this turned out and let me know if I should continue