I'm so sad that I have so few reviews even though it's already up to
chapter 10, I guess it was my fault since I kind of uploaded five or six
chapters in one day. I got kind of excited since it's my first fanfic, so
please forgive me.
I would love it if there were more reviews. If not, I'll have to slow down the updating, or the more chapters I have, the less reviews I seem to have, which I think, will make this story look bad, but I think this story deserves more than that, so please r&r. Anyway, I added something more in the front, so it's a little different in the prologue, or the prologue is just plain boring and has nothing to do with Saiyuki.
When the Two Worlds Collide
Prologue
Wind, thunder, water, and ice formed together and wrapped itself around Gojyo's chains. Along with the chaing, they twisted around the demon like a typhoon and enveloped her. She wasn't scared. History was repeating itself, and she knew it. There were no regrets, but only hatred toward those that betrayed her.
"Are you sure we are going to do this?" Hakkai asked with doubt. It was still so hard to believe.
"It's the only way. She'll destroy everything. Even though it was our fault, we have to stop her." Vessica answered with tears in her eyes.
The others around her nodded. The girls all had tears in their eyes, even Machi and Nuriko, at the destruction of their friends, but Sanzo, Gojyo, and Goku didn't show any expression. Yet, deep down, they were also hurting in some way.
"Let's do this." Sanzo said and pulled out the round mirror that Yohina had given to everybody. Everyone else did the same. They stood in a circle around the demon and pointed the mirror at her. A light shot out of each mirror and wrapped around her. She screamed at the pain, but she didn't struggle. Everything was coming to an end. If only she had...
"Goodbye..." She could hear her friends' whispers.
"I'm sorry..." Another thought rang in her mind...
"Goodbye..." She whispered and closed her eyes...
Yohina's eyes jerked open even as the darkness surrounded her. "A dream..." She thought to herself, but so real. She felt the pain as if something was still wrapped around her. Yet, she shook that feeling away and looked out of the window. It was raining just like yesterday. She sighed as she went to the bathroom to wash herself. "What a great day for my 17th birthday?" She thought gloomily. The morning was cloudy and dark as if it was the evening. She wondered if anyone was going to come to the party as she cleaned and dressed herself for the day.
Her parents had already left for work that morning. She remembered the argument she had with them last night. "They never cared about my birthday," she thought as tears swelled up in her eyes again. She looked into the mirror and saw that my eyes were still red from all the crying last night. "Hope no one notices." She thought miserably.
No one would come until late in the afternoon so Yohina did most of her homework. After finishing everything, she saw that it was 4:00pm already. She could not believe that she just spent 5 hours doing homework on the day of her birthday. Then, the doorbell rang just as she stood up and stretches. "So they are starting to come already?" Yohina thought as a smile appeared on her face.
As quickly as Yohina could, she rushed to the door happily. It was Machi and Nuriko. They were fighting at the doorway, as usual. "Stop fighting and get in!" Yohina had to scream to get their attention.
Machi and Nuriko froze at their position, stared at Yohina, and then smiled nervously.
"Come in! You are the first ones here!" Yohina said with a smile as she led the two of them into the house.
After saying goodbye to their parents, the three of them settled down. Well, at least Yohina did. Machi and Nuriko started to punch each other again. "Well, I guess I can't blame them for their enthusiasm." Yohina thought as she sat down and watched TV and ignored the two idiots.
Afterwards, the others started to arrive also. After Machi and Nuriko were Sakura and Vessica, then Takeya and Hikki arrived. The last was Shelly and Satsuki. Since Yohina had made it a sleep over party for today, most of the others would come to the party tomorrow.
Soon, Yohina's parents returned and cooked a gigantic meal for the 9 of them. "Man! They will regret that they missed today's party!" Yohina said with a smile as they started eating.
After dinner, Yohina's parents left the house to the girls again. "So how's things going with you guys? It's so not fun when we are not in the same school anymore." Yohina asked as they put in a movie that she had rented.
"Well, first of all, we are making good grades in Bellaire." Sakura became the spoke person for the group. "And?" Machi kept on asking. "All of them got a boyfriend except for Sakura if you want to know more." Yohina said with a teasing smile.
"Hey, what'd you mean? I don't have a boyfriend!" Vessica objected as her face turned red.
"Oh, really? What about that guy that teaches you how to sword fight? He's really cute and he is in all of your classes in school as well. For my information, the two of you are really close and he cares about you a lot!" Satsuki said with a mysterious smile. The rest of the girls "awed!" at her sentence.
Vessica blushed more as the others started to ask Satsuki what the guy was like. "I told you! HE IS NOT MY BOYFRIEND!" Vessica almost screamed when she couldn't take it anymore. However, the teasing didn't stop. Machi and Yohina kept on teasing them, even including Vessica in there no matter what she said about that guy. The rest of the girls blushed while Machi and Yohina teased them. "We are still the most innocent ones! From the beginning to the end!" Yohina said with pride. "Yeah! From the beginning to the end!" Machi and Sakura shouted out loudly after Yohina.
Then they watched the movies and sometimes talked about their school life and other stuff. All of them had been friends since middle school. Actually, they had gone to the same middle school. Then, Yohina and Machi and Takeya moved to another city, which was only twenty minutes drive from one place to another, but they had to go to another high school so they were separated. The truth is that except for Machi and Yohina and Takeya, the rest of the six girls all went to Bellaire High.
I would love it if there were more reviews. If not, I'll have to slow down the updating, or the more chapters I have, the less reviews I seem to have, which I think, will make this story look bad, but I think this story deserves more than that, so please r&r. Anyway, I added something more in the front, so it's a little different in the prologue, or the prologue is just plain boring and has nothing to do with Saiyuki.
When the Two Worlds Collide
Prologue
Wind, thunder, water, and ice formed together and wrapped itself around Gojyo's chains. Along with the chaing, they twisted around the demon like a typhoon and enveloped her. She wasn't scared. History was repeating itself, and she knew it. There were no regrets, but only hatred toward those that betrayed her.
"Are you sure we are going to do this?" Hakkai asked with doubt. It was still so hard to believe.
"It's the only way. She'll destroy everything. Even though it was our fault, we have to stop her." Vessica answered with tears in her eyes.
The others around her nodded. The girls all had tears in their eyes, even Machi and Nuriko, at the destruction of their friends, but Sanzo, Gojyo, and Goku didn't show any expression. Yet, deep down, they were also hurting in some way.
"Let's do this." Sanzo said and pulled out the round mirror that Yohina had given to everybody. Everyone else did the same. They stood in a circle around the demon and pointed the mirror at her. A light shot out of each mirror and wrapped around her. She screamed at the pain, but she didn't struggle. Everything was coming to an end. If only she had...
"Goodbye..." She could hear her friends' whispers.
"I'm sorry..." Another thought rang in her mind...
"Goodbye..." She whispered and closed her eyes...
Yohina's eyes jerked open even as the darkness surrounded her. "A dream..." She thought to herself, but so real. She felt the pain as if something was still wrapped around her. Yet, she shook that feeling away and looked out of the window. It was raining just like yesterday. She sighed as she went to the bathroom to wash herself. "What a great day for my 17th birthday?" She thought gloomily. The morning was cloudy and dark as if it was the evening. She wondered if anyone was going to come to the party as she cleaned and dressed herself for the day.
Her parents had already left for work that morning. She remembered the argument she had with them last night. "They never cared about my birthday," she thought as tears swelled up in her eyes again. She looked into the mirror and saw that my eyes were still red from all the crying last night. "Hope no one notices." She thought miserably.
No one would come until late in the afternoon so Yohina did most of her homework. After finishing everything, she saw that it was 4:00pm already. She could not believe that she just spent 5 hours doing homework on the day of her birthday. Then, the doorbell rang just as she stood up and stretches. "So they are starting to come already?" Yohina thought as a smile appeared on her face.
As quickly as Yohina could, she rushed to the door happily. It was Machi and Nuriko. They were fighting at the doorway, as usual. "Stop fighting and get in!" Yohina had to scream to get their attention.
Machi and Nuriko froze at their position, stared at Yohina, and then smiled nervously.
"Come in! You are the first ones here!" Yohina said with a smile as she led the two of them into the house.
After saying goodbye to their parents, the three of them settled down. Well, at least Yohina did. Machi and Nuriko started to punch each other again. "Well, I guess I can't blame them for their enthusiasm." Yohina thought as she sat down and watched TV and ignored the two idiots.
Afterwards, the others started to arrive also. After Machi and Nuriko were Sakura and Vessica, then Takeya and Hikki arrived. The last was Shelly and Satsuki. Since Yohina had made it a sleep over party for today, most of the others would come to the party tomorrow.
Soon, Yohina's parents returned and cooked a gigantic meal for the 9 of them. "Man! They will regret that they missed today's party!" Yohina said with a smile as they started eating.
After dinner, Yohina's parents left the house to the girls again. "So how's things going with you guys? It's so not fun when we are not in the same school anymore." Yohina asked as they put in a movie that she had rented.
"Well, first of all, we are making good grades in Bellaire." Sakura became the spoke person for the group. "And?" Machi kept on asking. "All of them got a boyfriend except for Sakura if you want to know more." Yohina said with a teasing smile.
"Hey, what'd you mean? I don't have a boyfriend!" Vessica objected as her face turned red.
"Oh, really? What about that guy that teaches you how to sword fight? He's really cute and he is in all of your classes in school as well. For my information, the two of you are really close and he cares about you a lot!" Satsuki said with a mysterious smile. The rest of the girls "awed!" at her sentence.
Vessica blushed more as the others started to ask Satsuki what the guy was like. "I told you! HE IS NOT MY BOYFRIEND!" Vessica almost screamed when she couldn't take it anymore. However, the teasing didn't stop. Machi and Yohina kept on teasing them, even including Vessica in there no matter what she said about that guy. The rest of the girls blushed while Machi and Yohina teased them. "We are still the most innocent ones! From the beginning to the end!" Yohina said with pride. "Yeah! From the beginning to the end!" Machi and Sakura shouted out loudly after Yohina.
Then they watched the movies and sometimes talked about their school life and other stuff. All of them had been friends since middle school. Actually, they had gone to the same middle school. Then, Yohina and Machi and Takeya moved to another city, which was only twenty minutes drive from one place to another, but they had to go to another high school so they were separated. The truth is that except for Machi and Yohina and Takeya, the rest of the six girls all went to Bellaire High.