I'm Sorry

HIYA!!!!!!!!!   This is my first Tenchi fic!  This is a poem from Sasami's point of view when Ryo-Oki ran away.  PLEASE I need reviews.  I don't know if this is a good fic, or if I should just stop writing Tenchi fics.  Please be kind...Oh yeah, I don't own nothin'...so DON'T SUE!!!!!!!! 

I'm Sorry

You ran far away

Because I called you bad

I wish you had stayed

Now I feel so sad

I'm sorry Ryo-Oki

For the bad things I called you

I want every thing to be Okie-dokie

What should I do?

Ayeka and Ryoko lied to me

And said that you broke it

I wonder why I didn't see

That the pieces didn't fit

Ryo-Oki please come home

I really miss you

Now I'm alone

Do you miss me too?

I'll wait for your return

And wish for you to come

Sobbing as the tears burn

How can I undo what's been done?

FIN

FrEaKy_Me:  Well?

Sasami: I liked it! It was

Ryoko: (interrupting)  Full of mushy stuff and other garbage like that?

Sasami:  NO! I thought it was sweet.

Ryo-Oki: MEOW!!!

FrEaKy_Me:  Do you all agree??? Hope so, well REVIEW, and Ryo-Oki will leave you alone, don't and let's just say you won't be eating carrots for a while!~(^-^)~