Summery: If bad people hurt someone you love, how far would you go to get revenge?
A/N: This is my first venture into fanfiction, so be gentle. I am usually more of a reader than a writer, but I just couldn't get this story out of my head, so I thought I would give it a try. Tim is my favorite NCIS character and I just loved the relationship he had with Sarah in Twisted Sister. This will be a multi-chapter story, and I hope to post at least one chapter a week, but I'm smack in the middle of midterms right now, so it might be a little slow at first. I should have the first two chapters up this week, though.
English is not my first language, so if you notice any grammar or spelling mistakes, let me know and I'll fix them.
I hope you enjoy!
Disclaimer: NCIS and its characters do not belong to me. I am not making any profit off of this story.
Ashes of Vengeance
by Paris-Du-Bois
Je ne te quitterai point que je ne t'aie vu pendu.
-Jean Baptiste Poquelin Moliere
Prologue
Beep. Beep. Beep.
The heart monitor echoes in his head. For a while, all he can do is close his eyes and listen to the steady sound of the nearby machines. His back rests against the hard hospital chair, but he barely notices, as he goes over it all in his head again, trying to figure out what went wrong.
Tim McGee was used to the people around him getting hurt. Working in law enforcement, it was almost to be expected. What he wasn't used to was the sight of his baby sister's body, broken and bruised, unconscious in a hospital bed.
"This shouldn't have happened," he says softly "I should have been there."
Overwhelmed, he stops talking for a moment and just watches the rise and fall of his sister's chest. Looking again at the bruises that mark his sister's face, Tim sighs and clenches his fists.
"I swear to god, Sarah. I'm going to find this guy, and I'm going to make him pay."