Hello Fanfiction. Thank you for viewing my story; it means alot to me!:)
This is my first Fanfic, so please be kind, but CONSTRUCTIVE critism is always very helpful and is 100% welcome!
This story is set more in the future...kinda, but not really. The Cullens have left Forks a whileago, and are now returning. But Aria (the main character) is NOT a Cullen.
Also a big shout out/thankyou to my current Beta Reader, brixxibear, for helping me work out some kinks in my story. (She's also my sister, lol)

So yeahh, I'm looking for a Beta Reader. So please, Read and Review. It would really help, and encourage me.

Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN THE TWILIGHT SAGA (but i wish i did) OR ANY OF THE CHARACTERS. ALL RIGHTS GO TO STEPHANIE MEYER/SCHOLASTIC PRESS

ON WITH THE STORY!:)

I was crouched down, watching the female deer drink from the cool stream 60 feet away. She stood in the giant grass meadow where I came often to hunt. She looked very peaceful standing there, oblivious to me watching her. For a second, I just sat there, closed my eyes, and listened to everything in the teeming forest. I heard the water of the stream flowing through the river banks, the sound of the leaves rustling in the wind, but most of all I listened to the steady heart beat of the deer. I could hear blood pulsating through her, and it only made me thirstier. My throat burned more than usual; as if it were on fire.

Slowly I stood up, and began to walk closer towards her, snapping twigs and crunching leaves on purpose to make sure that I was heard.

Her head snapped up from the water as he eyes scanned the open meadow for thing that made the sound. She sniffed the air, her nostrils flaring. She caught sight of me standing silently about 40 feet away. Her body went rigid for a spit second, and she instantly fled from the meadow, knowing that I was a VERY deadly predator.

Instincts took over my body, and I could feel the adrenaline moving under my ice cold, granite skin. I again crouched down, into a predatory stance, and counted to ten to give the helpless animal some sort of head start, and to add a little fun, because hunting isn't fun without a little chase.

"…Eight, nine, ten! Ready or not, here I come!" I sang to the deer, which was somewhere in the forest frantically trying to escape.

My body sprang forward with such speed, that if a human saw it, they would only see me there one second, and gone the next. Even though I was running at the speed of lightning, I could still see everything perfectly; as if I was taking a nice jog. I could see every last detail of the forest around me, like the soft gray feathers of the birds high above, or the line of ants that were climbing up the bark of the tree 10 feet away. But right now, I wasn't focused on all that. I was primarily focused on the sound of the fleeing deer's hooves, drumming against the forest floor. I followed the sound until the deer came into sight up ahead. The poor thing, it didn't stand a chance. It couldn't see me since I moved to fast to be seen by the naked eye, or the most high tech motion cameras. The deer couldn't even hear me because I moved so fast. Nobody can hear me. I caught up with the deer in a matter of seconds. My body coiled and my muscles flexed as I sprang at the deer.

I drove my Black Cherry, Nissan 370Z Coupe down the twisting main road of Forks, Washington. Today was my "first" day of high school. Well actually, that's what the humans thought. I've actually been through high school a little more than thirty times in a row. 34 times, maybe? I honestly don't know because I lost count. But today I will be starting Fork High School as a sophomore.

I looked out the window to my right. There are small shops, restaurants, and hunting supply stores lined up, and clustered in the strip mall. A little ways down the road, I could see a large building with a falcon painted on the side, which must be the school. I turned into the main parking lot. I could feel eyes on me, and I look up to see that every student in the parking lot was gawking at my car with their mouths wide open. I quickly scanned the area…..SHIT! The nicest car in the whole lot was a 2003 Chevy Pick-Up. So far I was blending in perfectly.

Before stepping out of my car, I flipped down my visor and opened the mirror. A girl with flawless, ivory skin, dark brown hair, and crystal blue eyes stared back at me. My hair was curled, to make perfect ringlets, and eyes were perfectly made up. My lips were full, plump, and the perfect shade of pink, even though I wasn't wearing lipstick. I took a deep breath to calm myself, and shut the mirror. Sighing, I turned and pushed open the door.

Did you like it? Yes? Well thank you, I love you! No? YOU SUCK XD Just kidding! If you like it, please review and tell me what you DO like. However, if you don't like it, please tell me why, so I can try to change it.
I'm also still looking for a Beta Reader. THANK YOU SO MUCH

-Alli