I haven't written a complete story yet and I'm really hoping that this will be the one I complete. I really appreciate reviews to let me know what you think and give me any tips you think I could use. I hope that you enjoy it.
Summer fun.
Sakura kinomoto, one of Japans top models was currently day dreaming in the office of Tomoyo Daidouji, Who as well as being sakura's childhood friend is one of the top designers in Japan and insists on using sakura as her main model. Tomoyo had asked sakura to come in to look and try on her latest range of summer range, but she could tell her best friends mind was somewhere else.
Said person was too busy looking out of the top floor office window to listen to what Tomoyo was talking about.
'It looks so lovely out there; I wish I could just be lazing in the sun today.'
Sakura pouted whilst being too deep in her thought to notice her friend walk up to her and flick her pouting lips.
"Hey, what was that for Moyo?" Sakura asked (whilst pouting again)
"You weren't listening to me Saku" Tomoyo answered whilst mimicking sakura's pout
"And anyway it will stop you from pouting again" she added as an after thought.
"I'm sorry Moyo, forgive me?" she asked while her big emerald eyes started to get all watery and her bottom lip started to wobble (a sakura kinomoto trademark move)
"Of course I do, and especially when your pulling your trademark face" Tomoyo said to her friend but not before throwing one of the cushions from the comfy sofa in the office directly at sakura's head and sticking her tongue out in victory as the cushions bounced right off sakura's head.
Sakura sent a playful glare at her friend "Owie" Sakura started to rub the part of her head that Tomoyo hit with the cushion.
"We've both been working really hard recently"
"That's an understatement" Sakura muttered thing that Tomoyo didn't hear (which of course she did)
"I was thinking that we could go on a holiday. What do you think?"
Tomoyo didn't really catch sakura's answer, due to the fact that as soon as Tomoyo said holiday sakura had jumped up and given Tomoyo a flying hug and they were now both in a tangled heap on the floor.
"Really Tomoyo, really, really?"
"Yes really, really"
"Yaaaaaaaay"
"Where are we going to go? How long are we going for? Who are we taking? What shall I wear? What will you wear? When will we go?"
Sakura hardly breathed through the whole sentence and was now taking big gulps of air trying to catch her breath.
Tomoyo laughed at the sight of sakura taking really big gulps of air which made her cheeks look like they were stuffed with food just like a hamsters.
"Well I thought we would go for a couple of weeks, we deserve the break. We can both decide where to go. We could go in the next couple of days. I'll sort out your clothes and mine. And I thought I might invite Eriol."
Sakura watched a small creeping blush spread across her friends face at the mention of Eriol's name even though they had been with each other for two years now. Sakura marvelled at her tomoyo could be so mature and yet immature at the same time.
"of course I don't mind Moyo, I've known Eriol nearly as long as I have known you, he's practically family."
"Thank you sooooo muck Saku. I'm going to go ring him now."
Sakura watched happily as her best friend skipped around the office with her mobile phone in hand waiting for Eriol to pick up. In the back of her head a little thought popped up and then was pushed back down again by sakura shaking her head frantically.
'Why can't I have someone who makes me that happy?'
So what do you think please let me know (and pretty please don't be to harsh)
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