Hey everyone! This is my first fanfic so i hope u like it! We talk about me later. Here it is!
Chapter 1
Max's POV
Our day starts when some "New And Improved" Erasers fly in above us and start kicking our butts without anyone knowing. Where were we you ask? A "vacation" stay at Ella's grandma's house in Hawaii. You would think "Oh wow Hawaii! kow-a-bunga!" right? Not us. Ever since we got off that plane (you know how twitchy I get in planes) we have been paranoid. Checking around every corner for Erasers. Checking every tight crack. Checking every coconut smothie. (No I am not joking) So finally after we began relaxing, BAM! Erasers start droping from everywhere. So of course we weren't ready for this because we were just relaxing drinking smothies so here we are in the present, in the butt kicking stage.
"WHERE THE HECK DID THEY COME FROM!?" I thought so that only Angel could hear me. "Max, calm down. It is only Erasers. We take them on pretty much every day." Angel said in my thoughts. I punched an Eraser in the jaw and heared a satisfing crack. "Yes Max, calm down". I grided my teeth. " Shut up, Voice." I was defently not in the mood to talk to him. "Max watch out!" It was Fang. I ducked just as a hairy fist sailed over my head. I grabed it and through it over me along with the body as well. "Thanks" I called back to him, but he was too deep in a fight that he didn't hear. After most of the Erasers were gone, I was walking over to him to thank him again when i felt a sharp pain in the back of my neck. I touched it but i didn't feel anything so I went on moving toward Fang but as i was moving, my vision became blury and I felt weird. I decided to thank Fang in the morning so I turned around and walked toward my room.
Fang POV
When I woke up this morning, it was quiet. I mean beside the sounds of the kids getting on Iggy's nerves and Ig chasing them around the house then Ig crashes into a poll outside. Besides that. I walk out of my room and down the hall to where I think is Max's room. I'm still getting used to this hawaiian beach house. I knock on the door. No answer. I knock again. Again, no answer. I gently push open the door to see Max still sleeping on her bed. Hum. Thats odd. Max is usally up At the most, 6 a.m. and it's almost 10. I shook her. She groaned and fliped over. I wispered "Max. Wake up you sleepy nut brain." She turned over and opened one eye. "whaisit" she slured. "Nothing" I said " It's just that it is almost 10" She looked up and frowned like she wanted to say somthing but didn't know the right way to put it."Max" I said " Are you alright?" She nodded then turned and went back to sleep. I ws really worried but let her sleep
Max POV
When I woke up after Fang left, I felt worse than yesterday, and that's saying something. I turned over and noticed something. I sat upright and ran for my bathroom. When I got there, my dinner raced through my mouth. I tried not to look but every time I caught a glimps, a new wave of puke came up. When I was done, I was shivering. I got up and rinsed my mouth out. I got dressed and went downstairs. Suprisenly, no one was down there so I could just say I had breakfest.
After looking around awhile, I finally found the flock on the roof waiting for me. I flew up and plastered a fake smile on my lips. "Ok every one, we will start today will formation drills." I heard a large collection of "Awwww"s " You will get in your pairs and practice." Pairs being: me + Fang, Iggy + Gassy, and Nudge + Angel. Each pair practices on a different side of the house. When me and Fang were up in the air, we flew above some trees for awhile before Fang broke the silence. " Are you shore you feel ok?" At that same moment I felt off. I couldn't see right. I couldn't hear right. I couldn't talk right. All i could manage was "nnnuuuooo" before I started falling... fast.
Did you like so far? Don't forget to R&R! By the way what does R&R mean? Also, what do you think should happen to Max. Should she die, should she break something, comment your opinion!
-Byronsar