Disclaimer: Rurouni Kenshin belongs to Nobuhiro Watsuki, Shueisha, Sony…
I'm not trying to make money with this (as if anyone would pay me for this
thing…)
Hello minna! It's my first fic ^__^… so I would like you to read it and tell me what you think. English is not my first language soooooo… well, I hope you understand everything. If you don't understand something (or anything) please tell me and I would try to correct it.
After reading the first reviews and mails (THANKS ^__^) I´ve discovered that you don't like one sentence Kaoru says…I've changed it. I've also erased all of the 'de gozaru yo' (I also think they don't go with the story). You've also told me that you think that there is a little too much OOC…Well, I think that there is no fanfic without OOC, but since you want to be warned… well… WARNING! OOC!
Well, here it goes…
Shadows from the past.
Chapter one.
The smile of a wolf.
Her face went suddenly pale. She coudn't believe what she had just heard…she couldn't…
A single tear went down her cheek and fell to her hand. He had… he had killed…
Another tear fell from her eyes, her deep blue eyes. Then she fainted.
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"Tadaima!"
The voice of Kenshin sounded form the gates of the dojo. 'Tadaima'. He had never thought that he could say that word again. 'I'm home'. Home. That was his home. And his family. Yahiko, Sanosuke, Megumi…and Kaoru. Kaoru.
An image of the girl appeared in his mind. Kaou. She was the reason. He smiled and went into the house.
Kaoru. He had never thought that he could have a home. But especially he had never thought of loving again. Not after Tomoe. Hoewever, she appeared in his life, a ray of light in the darkness. It was so wonderful just being with her, looking at her smile… Getting lost in her eyes…
"Kaoru-dono? Yahiko?"
He looked for them in the house, but it was empty. They were supposed to be at home… He heard laughs coming from the street.
"Well, I don't think so Yahiko-CHAN!"
"WHO ARE YOU CALLING CHAN?!?!?!? ROOSTER HEAD!!!!!"
Kenshin smiled as he saw his friends going into the house.
"Oi, Kenshin! Is dinner ready? I'm hungry!" Sano grinned, waiting for an affirmative answer.
"I was about to prepare it. I've just arrived."
"So where's busu? She didn't cook anything? Well, I don't feel like dying today!" Yahiko waited for his master to suddenly appear and knock him with her bokken, but nothing happened. "She isn't at home?"
"I thought she was here, but I haven't found her."
"She may be at the Akabeko with Tae. C'mon Kenshin don't worry AGAIN! Jo- chan is old enough. She knows how to defend herself" Sano didn't like the look of Kenshin. Man, the only thing that guy could do was worrying for the girl!
Kenshin sighed. "I'll go to the kitchen."
"Great!" Sano sat and waited for his dinner. He and Yahiko started fighting again.
'They are very noisy' Kenshin thought. But he liked that noise. He liked the sounds of that house, of that people. He only missed the laughs that always followed Kaoru.
'Mou' he said to himself 'I'd better prepare dinner before Kaoru's back'.
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'It's late. It's too late.' Kenshin was worrying more than usual. 'Why hasn't she arrived yet? Where is she?'
Sano had alredy gone home. Yahiko was in his room. But there was no trace of Kaoru. Kenshin caught his sakabatou and went out to look for her.
He went to the Akabeko, but she wasn't there. Tae told him that the girl had gone hours ago.
Kenshin went round the streets looking for a young woman with long black hair and blue eyes in a violet kimono. Nobody had seen her. He started lo panic. What if she had been attacked? What if she had been kidnapped? What if…?
He was so lost in his thoughts that he didn't see a woman in front of him until it was too late. He bumped into her, and the woman fell to the ground.
"Sorry! I didn't… Kaoru-dono!" the samurai suddenly realized who the woman was and helped her stand up. "Sessha was so worried. Why are you here alone? It's very late. You should have…" he shut up as he saw her face.
Her eyes were red, covered with tears. She was shaking, her skin paler than the moon.
"Kaoru-dono! What…what happened?" He felt his heart torn up as more tears fell from her eyes. "Please don't cry…don't cry…" he cleaned her tears with his hands. "What…?"
He couldn't finish his question. She turned her back on him.
"I'm tired Kenshin. I want to go home." She started to walk away from him.
He was shocked, his hand in the air, where her face was. He didn't know what had happened. He only knew that there was something wrong with Kaoru. He had seen so much sadness, so much grief in her eyes… He was so worried that he didn't feel the smile of a wolf who was watching the scene and enjoying the suffering of Batousai…
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He hugged her.
"Aishiteru."
She was so happy…
"Aishiteru."
She had waited so long for those simple words…
"Aishiteru."
But now it was true. She looked at his violet eyes. She oppened her mouth and started "Aish…" but suddenly stopped when she saw his hands, stained with blood. She looked down and screamed when she saw a mountain of corpses under them. She looked at her kimono, red from the blood in his hands. She looked at him, but she didn't met the kind violet eyes she had seen before, but a pair of cold eyes…amber eyes…
He repeated
"Aishiteru."
She tried to give a step back, but he was holding her very tightly. She screamed
"Let go of me!"
He kissed her
"You should have thought it before falling in love with a hitokiri."
"You're not a hitokiri! You're not an assassin!"
He grinned
"Are you sure?"
She screamed as she opened her eyes. It's been a dream. Not a dream- a nightmare. She was sweating and shaking. The door of her room opened and Kenshin went in, frightened.
"Kaoru-dono! What…"
She talked before he could finish his question.
"It's ok, Kenshin, it was just a nightmare. I'm sorry, I didn't mean to scare you."
He looked at her, shocked. He tried to open his mouth, but he couldn't say anything.
"Is breakfast ready?"
"H…Hai."
"I'm going in a minute."
The samurai looked at her. He didn't know what to do. He wanted to ask her, but she didn't let him say a word.
"Onegai, go out. I have to change my clothes…"
Kenshin went out of the room, closing the door behind him. Then he heard Kaoru. She was crying. Her cry sounded so hopeless, so painfull… He wanted to go into the room, hold her and tell her not to worry… he wanted to kiss all of her tears…he loved her so much…but he couldn't go there. She had asked him politely to leave her alone. Feeling his heart torn, he started to walk towards the kitchen.
Kenshin knew that there was something wrong with Kaoru's soul. He could feel it, but since she wanted to be alone, there was nothing he could do. The night before he couldn't believe what he was seeing. Her beautiful face was covered with tears. What had happened to make Kaoru cry in that way? When he heard the scream from her room he ran as much as he could. 'It's only a nightmare.' That's what she had said. But the former hitokiri was worried because of that nightmare. She had never had such a terrible dream. He knew it because…because…every night he went into her room only to watch her sleeping. It was such a wonderful feeling…her calm, her quietness, her peace…sometimes she had nightmares, but never one like that, with a scream of pain and sadness which made him remember his own ones.
Yahiko was waiting for them to start having breakfast.
"Oi, Kenshin! Is busu still asleep?" The boy froze as he saw the cold gaze kenshin was giving him.
"Yahiko, sessha would thank you not to tease Kaoru-dono this morning." His voice, usually kind and soft, had got tough, authoritarian…threatening.Yahiko nodded and lowered his head.
"Ohayo!!!! Is breakfast ready? My body is asking me for food!"Sanosuke went into the house grinning. He shut up when he saw the faces of his friends. "What…"
SLAM!!!!!
The men looked at the place where the sound came from. It was Kaoru, going into the room. Her face was red, her eyes avoided the looks from her friends. If Kenshin hadn't warned Yahiko, the boy would have started teasing his master…but nobody had warned Sanosuke.
"Oi, Jo-chan! You look really awful today! You look worse than never!" he grinned as he talked, waiting for Yahiko to join him, but the boy lowered his head. "What…" he looked at Kenshin. His eyes were getting a dangerous colour… "What…" he finally looked at Kaoru. She had her hands hiding her face.
Sanosuke was shocked. Kaoru sighed and lowered her hands. One tear was falling from her eyes.
"I…I'm not hungry. I'll be waiting for you in the dojo Yahiko." She started to go out of the room. Kenshin gave a step forwards to follow her, but she stopped him.
"Onegai, Kenshin. I'm fine, really. Don't follow me."
With those words she went out to the yard, leaving the room full of tension. Sanosuke looked at Kenshin, trying to find the right words.
"I…I'm sorry…I didn't know…"
"Don't worry Sanosuke. It's not your fault de gozaru yo."
Yahiko stood up, still looking down.
"Kenshin" the man looked at the boy "What…what happens with Kaoru? I want to know…"
The samurai was trying to control himself, trying not to go running behind her.
"I wish I knew it Yahiko" was the only answer "I wish I knew…"
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Several days passed. Kaoru behaved in a very strange ay. She avoided her friends, but especially she avoided Kenshin. He knew it. He tried to talk to her, he tried to make her talk, even a word. But he only got looks full of pain and sadness. Looks hich hid a terrible fight in her heart… a fight between love and hate, sadness, guilty and pain. The pain was killing her heart, her spirit…the pain didn't let her laugh, didn't let her dream, didn't let her live…the only thing she was able to do was having nightmares, night terrors which hounded her soul.
Kenshin decided that it was time to know what was happening to Kaoru. That morning they were alone. He was doing the laundry and she was cleaning the dojo.
Kaoru was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't realize that Kenshin was in front of her.
"Kaoru-dono…sessha thinks it's time to talk."
She raised her sight. The girl didn't know what to do. She couldn't escape, she couldn't hide…she couldn't stop looking at those gold and violet eyes which asked her, begged her for an answer.
She tried to smile.
"What do you mean?"
He gazed at her.
"Onegai, Kaoru-dono. We are worried about you."
"About me? Why? I'm fine. I don't…" she couldn't stand those eyes. She couldn't. But she couldn't answer his question.
"Onegai."
She stood up. They were gazing at each other's eyes.
"I can't…" she looked away, but Kenshin hold her chin.
"Look at me Kaoru-dono. Why can't you answer me?"
A tear… oh Kami-sama! How often had she cried the last days? Whenever she knew there was nobody looking at her, oceans of tears covered her face. She had always thought that she was strong, that she could find a solution for any problem. But the last events were too difficult for her. The information she had got was so painfull, so terrible, that she couldn't think right…
"Ican't! I CAN'T! Onegai Kenshin…I CAN'T!!!"
Kenshin was still holding her chin.
"Answer me." It was not a question. It was an order.
She released her face, but Kenshin held her by her wrists.
"If you don't tell me why you're afraid I won't be able to protect you."
No more 'sessha'. No more 'dono'. Only a pair of amber eyes, a threatening look.
"The only thing a need protection from is you assassin!!!!!" Kaoru regreted her words in the very moment they went out of her mouth.
'A…assassin? She has called me…?' Kenshin couldn't believe what he had just heard. He didn't know what to do. 'Assassin?' He released her wrists and saw the woman running away from him. 'Assassin. Yes. I'm aassassin. But I had never thought that she…she…assassin …assassin!!!' Voices sounded through his mind. His hand went to his sword, he caught it and hold it.
'ASSASSIN!!!'
Suddenly all covered with blood. Before him ther was a red curtain, red from the blood…his hands were stained with blood. His soul was stained with blood.
'ASSASSIN!!!'
He couldn't react. He could only see the look of hate of Kaoru, her deep blue eyes which used to be full of love, now drown in hate.
'ASSASSIN!!!'
He tried to hide his face behind his hands. The sword fell to the ground.
'ASSASSIN!!!'
Of course he was a slayer. Of course she knew it. But he thought that she accepted him whatever his past was. But those words…
'ASSASSIN!!!'
Those words resounded in his mind. Those words had just destroyed his world. That was the way she saw him, only a…
'ASSASSIN!!!'
"Oh, c'mon Battousai. Don't tell me you're so affected because of the words of a stupid little girl."
Kenshin didn't need to look back to know who had just talked behind him. He didn't need to look back. He knew that if he did it, he would only find the smile of a wolf.
Notes:
My little glossary (well…more or less…):
Onegai: Please
Tadaima: I'm home.
Dono: Japanese sufix used after names.
Hai: Yes
Chan: another Japanese suffix.
Hitokiri: assassin
Aishiteru: I love you
Busu: ugly. This is how Yahiko calls Kaoru.
Jo-chan: this is how Sanosuke calls Kaoru. It means 'little miss'
Ohayo: good morning.
Well…what do you think? Better? Worse? Is it too long? Too short? Well written? Awfully written? Please reviewwwwwwww!!!! Tell me whatever you want (well…not whatever…). C&C are welcome.
And before going… some people have told me that I've got some (well…more than some ¬¬U) grammatical mistakes. As I said, English is not my first language. The problem is that I don't know anybody who speaks English properly. If any of you wants to volunteer to read the following chapters and correct my mistakes I'd be very really really grateful. If you think you want to do it (please say yes!) e-mail me (or email me… or e mail me…errrr well, whatever, write to me) . ^__^
Hello minna! It's my first fic ^__^… so I would like you to read it and tell me what you think. English is not my first language soooooo… well, I hope you understand everything. If you don't understand something (or anything) please tell me and I would try to correct it.
After reading the first reviews and mails (THANKS ^__^) I´ve discovered that you don't like one sentence Kaoru says…I've changed it. I've also erased all of the 'de gozaru yo' (I also think they don't go with the story). You've also told me that you think that there is a little too much OOC…Well, I think that there is no fanfic without OOC, but since you want to be warned… well… WARNING! OOC!
Well, here it goes…
Shadows from the past.
Chapter one.
The smile of a wolf.
Her face went suddenly pale. She coudn't believe what she had just heard…she couldn't…
A single tear went down her cheek and fell to her hand. He had… he had killed…
Another tear fell from her eyes, her deep blue eyes. Then she fainted.
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"Tadaima!"
The voice of Kenshin sounded form the gates of the dojo. 'Tadaima'. He had never thought that he could say that word again. 'I'm home'. Home. That was his home. And his family. Yahiko, Sanosuke, Megumi…and Kaoru. Kaoru.
An image of the girl appeared in his mind. Kaou. She was the reason. He smiled and went into the house.
Kaoru. He had never thought that he could have a home. But especially he had never thought of loving again. Not after Tomoe. Hoewever, she appeared in his life, a ray of light in the darkness. It was so wonderful just being with her, looking at her smile… Getting lost in her eyes…
"Kaoru-dono? Yahiko?"
He looked for them in the house, but it was empty. They were supposed to be at home… He heard laughs coming from the street.
"Well, I don't think so Yahiko-CHAN!"
"WHO ARE YOU CALLING CHAN?!?!?!? ROOSTER HEAD!!!!!"
Kenshin smiled as he saw his friends going into the house.
"Oi, Kenshin! Is dinner ready? I'm hungry!" Sano grinned, waiting for an affirmative answer.
"I was about to prepare it. I've just arrived."
"So where's busu? She didn't cook anything? Well, I don't feel like dying today!" Yahiko waited for his master to suddenly appear and knock him with her bokken, but nothing happened. "She isn't at home?"
"I thought she was here, but I haven't found her."
"She may be at the Akabeko with Tae. C'mon Kenshin don't worry AGAIN! Jo- chan is old enough. She knows how to defend herself" Sano didn't like the look of Kenshin. Man, the only thing that guy could do was worrying for the girl!
Kenshin sighed. "I'll go to the kitchen."
"Great!" Sano sat and waited for his dinner. He and Yahiko started fighting again.
'They are very noisy' Kenshin thought. But he liked that noise. He liked the sounds of that house, of that people. He only missed the laughs that always followed Kaoru.
'Mou' he said to himself 'I'd better prepare dinner before Kaoru's back'.
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'It's late. It's too late.' Kenshin was worrying more than usual. 'Why hasn't she arrived yet? Where is she?'
Sano had alredy gone home. Yahiko was in his room. But there was no trace of Kaoru. Kenshin caught his sakabatou and went out to look for her.
He went to the Akabeko, but she wasn't there. Tae told him that the girl had gone hours ago.
Kenshin went round the streets looking for a young woman with long black hair and blue eyes in a violet kimono. Nobody had seen her. He started lo panic. What if she had been attacked? What if she had been kidnapped? What if…?
He was so lost in his thoughts that he didn't see a woman in front of him until it was too late. He bumped into her, and the woman fell to the ground.
"Sorry! I didn't… Kaoru-dono!" the samurai suddenly realized who the woman was and helped her stand up. "Sessha was so worried. Why are you here alone? It's very late. You should have…" he shut up as he saw her face.
Her eyes were red, covered with tears. She was shaking, her skin paler than the moon.
"Kaoru-dono! What…what happened?" He felt his heart torn up as more tears fell from her eyes. "Please don't cry…don't cry…" he cleaned her tears with his hands. "What…?"
He couldn't finish his question. She turned her back on him.
"I'm tired Kenshin. I want to go home." She started to walk away from him.
He was shocked, his hand in the air, where her face was. He didn't know what had happened. He only knew that there was something wrong with Kaoru. He had seen so much sadness, so much grief in her eyes… He was so worried that he didn't feel the smile of a wolf who was watching the scene and enjoying the suffering of Batousai…
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He hugged her.
"Aishiteru."
She was so happy…
"Aishiteru."
She had waited so long for those simple words…
"Aishiteru."
But now it was true. She looked at his violet eyes. She oppened her mouth and started "Aish…" but suddenly stopped when she saw his hands, stained with blood. She looked down and screamed when she saw a mountain of corpses under them. She looked at her kimono, red from the blood in his hands. She looked at him, but she didn't met the kind violet eyes she had seen before, but a pair of cold eyes…amber eyes…
He repeated
"Aishiteru."
She tried to give a step back, but he was holding her very tightly. She screamed
"Let go of me!"
He kissed her
"You should have thought it before falling in love with a hitokiri."
"You're not a hitokiri! You're not an assassin!"
He grinned
"Are you sure?"
She screamed as she opened her eyes. It's been a dream. Not a dream- a nightmare. She was sweating and shaking. The door of her room opened and Kenshin went in, frightened.
"Kaoru-dono! What…"
She talked before he could finish his question.
"It's ok, Kenshin, it was just a nightmare. I'm sorry, I didn't mean to scare you."
He looked at her, shocked. He tried to open his mouth, but he couldn't say anything.
"Is breakfast ready?"
"H…Hai."
"I'm going in a minute."
The samurai looked at her. He didn't know what to do. He wanted to ask her, but she didn't let him say a word.
"Onegai, go out. I have to change my clothes…"
Kenshin went out of the room, closing the door behind him. Then he heard Kaoru. She was crying. Her cry sounded so hopeless, so painfull… He wanted to go into the room, hold her and tell her not to worry… he wanted to kiss all of her tears…he loved her so much…but he couldn't go there. She had asked him politely to leave her alone. Feeling his heart torn, he started to walk towards the kitchen.
Kenshin knew that there was something wrong with Kaoru's soul. He could feel it, but since she wanted to be alone, there was nothing he could do. The night before he couldn't believe what he was seeing. Her beautiful face was covered with tears. What had happened to make Kaoru cry in that way? When he heard the scream from her room he ran as much as he could. 'It's only a nightmare.' That's what she had said. But the former hitokiri was worried because of that nightmare. She had never had such a terrible dream. He knew it because…because…every night he went into her room only to watch her sleeping. It was such a wonderful feeling…her calm, her quietness, her peace…sometimes she had nightmares, but never one like that, with a scream of pain and sadness which made him remember his own ones.
Yahiko was waiting for them to start having breakfast.
"Oi, Kenshin! Is busu still asleep?" The boy froze as he saw the cold gaze kenshin was giving him.
"Yahiko, sessha would thank you not to tease Kaoru-dono this morning." His voice, usually kind and soft, had got tough, authoritarian…threatening.Yahiko nodded and lowered his head.
"Ohayo!!!! Is breakfast ready? My body is asking me for food!"Sanosuke went into the house grinning. He shut up when he saw the faces of his friends. "What…"
SLAM!!!!!
The men looked at the place where the sound came from. It was Kaoru, going into the room. Her face was red, her eyes avoided the looks from her friends. If Kenshin hadn't warned Yahiko, the boy would have started teasing his master…but nobody had warned Sanosuke.
"Oi, Jo-chan! You look really awful today! You look worse than never!" he grinned as he talked, waiting for Yahiko to join him, but the boy lowered his head. "What…" he looked at Kenshin. His eyes were getting a dangerous colour… "What…" he finally looked at Kaoru. She had her hands hiding her face.
Sanosuke was shocked. Kaoru sighed and lowered her hands. One tear was falling from her eyes.
"I…I'm not hungry. I'll be waiting for you in the dojo Yahiko." She started to go out of the room. Kenshin gave a step forwards to follow her, but she stopped him.
"Onegai, Kenshin. I'm fine, really. Don't follow me."
With those words she went out to the yard, leaving the room full of tension. Sanosuke looked at Kenshin, trying to find the right words.
"I…I'm sorry…I didn't know…"
"Don't worry Sanosuke. It's not your fault de gozaru yo."
Yahiko stood up, still looking down.
"Kenshin" the man looked at the boy "What…what happens with Kaoru? I want to know…"
The samurai was trying to control himself, trying not to go running behind her.
"I wish I knew it Yahiko" was the only answer "I wish I knew…"
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Several days passed. Kaoru behaved in a very strange ay. She avoided her friends, but especially she avoided Kenshin. He knew it. He tried to talk to her, he tried to make her talk, even a word. But he only got looks full of pain and sadness. Looks hich hid a terrible fight in her heart… a fight between love and hate, sadness, guilty and pain. The pain was killing her heart, her spirit…the pain didn't let her laugh, didn't let her dream, didn't let her live…the only thing she was able to do was having nightmares, night terrors which hounded her soul.
Kenshin decided that it was time to know what was happening to Kaoru. That morning they were alone. He was doing the laundry and she was cleaning the dojo.
Kaoru was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't realize that Kenshin was in front of her.
"Kaoru-dono…sessha thinks it's time to talk."
She raised her sight. The girl didn't know what to do. She couldn't escape, she couldn't hide…she couldn't stop looking at those gold and violet eyes which asked her, begged her for an answer.
She tried to smile.
"What do you mean?"
He gazed at her.
"Onegai, Kaoru-dono. We are worried about you."
"About me? Why? I'm fine. I don't…" she couldn't stand those eyes. She couldn't. But she couldn't answer his question.
"Onegai."
She stood up. They were gazing at each other's eyes.
"I can't…" she looked away, but Kenshin hold her chin.
"Look at me Kaoru-dono. Why can't you answer me?"
A tear… oh Kami-sama! How often had she cried the last days? Whenever she knew there was nobody looking at her, oceans of tears covered her face. She had always thought that she was strong, that she could find a solution for any problem. But the last events were too difficult for her. The information she had got was so painfull, so terrible, that she couldn't think right…
"Ican't! I CAN'T! Onegai Kenshin…I CAN'T!!!"
Kenshin was still holding her chin.
"Answer me." It was not a question. It was an order.
She released her face, but Kenshin held her by her wrists.
"If you don't tell me why you're afraid I won't be able to protect you."
No more 'sessha'. No more 'dono'. Only a pair of amber eyes, a threatening look.
"The only thing a need protection from is you assassin!!!!!" Kaoru regreted her words in the very moment they went out of her mouth.
'A…assassin? She has called me…?' Kenshin couldn't believe what he had just heard. He didn't know what to do. 'Assassin?' He released her wrists and saw the woman running away from him. 'Assassin. Yes. I'm aassassin. But I had never thought that she…she…assassin …assassin!!!' Voices sounded through his mind. His hand went to his sword, he caught it and hold it.
'ASSASSIN!!!'
Suddenly all covered with blood. Before him ther was a red curtain, red from the blood…his hands were stained with blood. His soul was stained with blood.
'ASSASSIN!!!'
He couldn't react. He could only see the look of hate of Kaoru, her deep blue eyes which used to be full of love, now drown in hate.
'ASSASSIN!!!'
He tried to hide his face behind his hands. The sword fell to the ground.
'ASSASSIN!!!'
Of course he was a slayer. Of course she knew it. But he thought that she accepted him whatever his past was. But those words…
'ASSASSIN!!!'
Those words resounded in his mind. Those words had just destroyed his world. That was the way she saw him, only a…
'ASSASSIN!!!'
"Oh, c'mon Battousai. Don't tell me you're so affected because of the words of a stupid little girl."
Kenshin didn't need to look back to know who had just talked behind him. He didn't need to look back. He knew that if he did it, he would only find the smile of a wolf.
Notes:
My little glossary (well…more or less…):
Onegai: Please
Tadaima: I'm home.
Dono: Japanese sufix used after names.
Hai: Yes
Chan: another Japanese suffix.
Hitokiri: assassin
Aishiteru: I love you
Busu: ugly. This is how Yahiko calls Kaoru.
Jo-chan: this is how Sanosuke calls Kaoru. It means 'little miss'
Ohayo: good morning.
Well…what do you think? Better? Worse? Is it too long? Too short? Well written? Awfully written? Please reviewwwwwwww!!!! Tell me whatever you want (well…not whatever…). C&C are welcome.
And before going… some people have told me that I've got some (well…more than some ¬¬U) grammatical mistakes. As I said, English is not my first language. The problem is that I don't know anybody who speaks English properly. If any of you wants to volunteer to read the following chapters and correct my mistakes I'd be very really really grateful. If you think you want to do it (please say yes!) e-mail me (or email me… or e mail me…errrr well, whatever, write to me) . ^__^