A/N: So, ok I know many people might be wondering that why I would right my first fic on love hina (yea the anime ended a loooong timeee agoooo) but truth be told I am a huge fan of it and recently I saw it again and yea also read the fics over here and I had a couple of ideas regarding the anime so heres one of them..hope u guys enjoy it
Disclaimer: I do not own love hina (whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy *sob* *sob*) its owned by Ken Akamatsu
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Chapter 1: The Beginning
Our story begins at the hinata apartments, a girl is sitting in her room looking out the window and lost in her thoughts."Its been six months since he's been gone away" This girl had the looks that would make any man fall fer her in an instance, her long brown hair, great figure, and a sweet voice that would melt anyone."That idiot after proposing to me he had to leavc".This girl lost in her thoughts was Naru Narusegawa,she was feeling like the most luckiest girl in the world.
All of her dreams were coming true, she had finally passed the entrance exam at Tokyo U, she was one with her family once again and most of all she finally had someone who loved her and promised to be with her for her entire life.
"I just hope that idiot comes back soon so I can send him back flying" said an annoyed Naru
Flashback
Hinata Apartments
"I am sorry Naru really" said the clumsy hina inn manager
"Well you should be I can't believe you would leave after proposing to me" said an enraged Naru
A worried Keitaro started begging to Naru by grabbing her feet "Please Naru I am sorry" and started weeping (like the anime face crying keitaro makes when apologizing to the girls) (especially to Naru).But poor Keitaro's luck while holding onto Naru's skirt he pulled it down
"I-I'm s-s-sorry please…" said a now scared Keitaro
Naru lifted her fist and prepared for the Naru punch "Just because I accepted your proposal does'nt mean you can see me like this!" the infamous punch flew towards Keitaro and sent him flying in the sky at the speed of light.
Flashback ended
"I just hope he comes back already." while Naru was lost in her thoughts she did'nt notice someone had snuck up behind her and grabbed her from let out a loud shriek only to realize it was the local fox Kitsune.
Kitsune and Naru had been bestfriends (BFF's :P) forever and Kitsune had always been supportive of even played a big part in getting Naru to express her feelings to Keitaro.
"Hey Naru what you upto, thinking about your lovebud are you" Kitsune said with a seductive face "Aahhh Kitsune no it's nothing like that I was just uhhh... thinking about studies yea that's it studies' said a nervous Naru. "What are you doing here by the way?" Kitsune replied "Ohhh Shinobu sent me up here to call you down for dinner everybody's waiting for you"
"Ohh I'll be down in a sec ok you go on ahead" Kitsune as lazy (and sometimes stupid) as she is she understood what was worrying her friend "Look Naru I know Keitaro has been gone for a while but he'll be back soon he said it himself don't worry" Kitsune knew how to cheerup her bestbud.
Upon hearing this made Naru feel alot better. "Alright thanks Kitsune let's go down for dinner I am starving" Kitsune gave her a smile and they both went down to join everybody.
They were greeted by the inn cook Shinobu. She had a childish attraction towards her and always had a cheerful spirit, although being timid and shy she always had a knack to help anyone she could. "Ohh hi Naru your just in time for dinner I made fried rice,miso soup".Before she could finish she was jumped by the energetic and crazy Kaolla Su. "Hey Shinobu!" Shinobu nearly jumped 10 feet into the air and fell right down. "Su stop scaring Shinobu" said the Kendo Girl Motoko "Just sit down and eat with the rest of us" Kaolla playfully jumped on Motoko's head and said "Heya Motoko". It took Shinobu (surprisingly) to control Su by showing her the onething she cannoy resist. BANANAS. "Look Su I made banana cream custard for you" Su upon looking just jumped onto her seat and started chowing down. All the other girls had a small giggle and also proceeded to their eating. The remainder of dinner was uneventful and after everyone finished thanked Shinobu for the great meal (Like they always do) and went on their ways.
After doing the dishes Shinobu went upto Naru's room to ask for her help with some math problems, she knocked on the door "Come in" was the answer from inside "Sorry for disturbing you Naru but I was wondering if you could help me with some problems I am having with my homework" "Ohhh sure why not Shinobu" replied Naru with a smile. Few minutes and a couple of problems later, "So you just divide this from the answer we got here and you will find the given value" after understanding the equation nodded Shinobu "Wow thankyou Naru it would have taken me all night to figure this out" "No problem Shinobu glad I could help" Shinobu seemed to be anxious about something and Naru noticed and asked "What's wrong Shinobu something wrong" the little girl got startled upon hearing that and quickly replied "No no nothing Naru it's just that Keitaro has just been gone for so long now and he-he even pr-prop..proposed to marry you and everything so just..." upon hearing this Naru felt back into her thoughts again
Ended
Ok yea I know people reading this would be wondering what the heck is going on in this fic, well thruth be told this is my first time writing and I have some plans and have already started chp 2 this is kind of like a small glimpse of what is in stored
So guys please read this and also rate and review would love some extra pointers not only regarding the fic but overall storytelling as well
And before I am asked where is Keitaro? where the hell is he gone? how could you keep the main character out of the story? Well I have planned that out and hopefully he will be making an appearance soon so don't worry
And again read rate and review will all be loved because without any of the readers this would mean nothing thankyou again