Hey guys. So this is a new story. Well... I'm not sure if it's gonna be a one-shot or a multi-chapter story... Review and let me know what you think... Loren's pov *Loren's room
I moved back in with my mom when I found out. I just upped and left. I guess he came home from dinner with his dad and saw all my stuff gone. He came the next morning. His eyes were red. He tried to see me. I yelled at him. He's made me such a mess! I hate him for cheating on me. I need to get over him.
Eddie's pov
*Eddie's car
I'm such an idiot! I miss Loren so much! She hates me now. I can't blame her. I hate myself. What I did was such a mistake. God I just want to punch something! I'll have to see her soon. Pops is getting married to Nora in two weeks. At least he didn't make such a dumb mistake.
*Flashback
Eddie heard his phone ringing and went to answer it.
Eddie: Hello?
Ian: Hey Mate!
Eddie: Oh hey Ian.
Ian: Listen, I'm in town and I was wondering if you wanted to go hit some clubs? I know Valley girl, oops I mean Loren, is on tour right now. So you have no reason to say no.
Eddie: I don't know Ian...
Ian: Come on mate it will be fun!
Eddie: Okay. When?
Just then Eddie heard a knock on the door. Eddie goes and opens the door to see and Ian hung up their phones.
Ian: How about now?
Eddie: Fine. Let me just put my shoes on.
Ian: Okay.
Thirty minutes later they arrived at CEK only one of the hottest clubs in Hollywood.
Ian: Ready?
Eddie: Yeah.
One hour later Eddie was drunk as hell when Chloe came over to talk to him. One thing led to another and they both woke up at a hotel the next morning.
What am I doing here? Why are my clothes over there?! CRAP!
Chloe: Hey babe. I'm so glad you dumped that teenybopper!
Eddie: No. No. NO! Please tell me we didn't...
Chloe: Yup. So um who's gonna break it to Valley girl? Or do you want to keep this our dirty little secret?
A couple of days later Loren was back. Eddie had just gotten back from dinner with his dad.
Eddie: Hey Lo I'm home.
No response.
Eddie: Lo?
Eddie goes upstairs to see all of Loren's things gone and a note.
Note: Eddie, I thought you were a better person. Turns out you are just like her. Turns out she was right. So how long has this been going on? Has it been going on the whole year and a half we've been dating? Please don't call, text, or even come and try to see me.
Bests to you and Chloe,
Loren
Eddie starts bawling his eyes out.
The next day Eddie goes over to Loren house and knocks on the door. Nora opens the door.
Eddie: Please let me see her Nora. Please!
Nora: I'm sorry Eddie, but she doesn't want to see her, and frankly I don't blame her.
Loren walks up behind her mom. She is in sweats.
Loren: It's okay mom. Can you give us a second?
Nora: Sure.
And with that Nora left Loren and Eddie alone. Loren walks out of the house and closes the door behind her. Loren looks Eddie straight in the eyes.
Loren: You know, I was hoping that it was just a lie, but I can see it in you're eyes that wasn't. I hate you. I never wanna see you again! Don't try to contact me! We are SO over!
Loren starts to head back inside when Eddie grabs one of Loren's wrists. Loren slaps him as soon as he touched her.
Loren: I mean it Eddie.
Loren's eyes brimmed with tears.
Eddie: Lo, can...
Eddie was cut off by Loren.
Loren: No. You don't have the right to call me that anymore. I think it's time you leave.
Eddie tried his best not to cry.
Eddie: If that's the way you feel.
And with that Eddie got in his car and left as Loren went back into the house and into her room.
*End of flashback
Radio person: And now the new single by Loren Tate!
I should turn this off... I do want to hear song though. I guess I'll just leave it on. I wonder if she's heard my new song...
*Loren's song
I think you got the best of me
You're sleepin' with the enemy
You left me all alone, alone, alone, alone
The beat drops, I'm so low
My heart stops, I already know
You left me all alone, alone, alone, alone
God what did I do?
I'm sick and tired of the mess you made me
Never gonna catch me cry
Oh whoa whoa
You must be blind if you can't see
You'll miss me 'til the day you die
Oh whoa whoa
Without me, you're nothing
Oh whoa whoa
You must be blind if you can't see
You'll miss me 'til the day you die
Oh whoa whoa
I'm such a jerk! I wish I could go back in time. She is right though... I will miss her til the day I die.
I've let go, finally over you
This drama that you put me through
I'm better all alone, alone, alone, alone
The beat drops, you're so low
It's last call and it's gotten old
Now look who's all alone, alone, alone, alone
I guess I did put her through a lot of drama...
I'm sick and tired of the mess you made me
Never gonna catch me cry
Oh whoa whoa
You must be blind if you can't see
You'll miss me 'til the day you die
Oh whoa whoa
Without me, you're nothing
Oh whoa whoa
You must be blind if you can't see
You'll miss me 'til the day you die
Oh whoa whoa
I feel like such an ass!
I trusted you, you were the first
Then you lied and it gets worse
You broke me down
Now just look around
Who's all alone?
Who's all alone now?
I was her first... I hoped to be her last... I guess that won't happen.
I'm sick and tired of the mess you made me
Never gonna catch me cry
Oh whoa whoa
You must be blind if you can't see
You'll miss me 'til the day you die
Oh whoa whoa
Without me you're nothing
Oh whoa whoa
You must be blind if you can't see
You'll miss me 'til the day you die
By the end of the song Eddie is crying.
I hate myself! I wish I could prove to her that I love her and only her! She hates me though. How can I get through to her? Maybe with the song I just released.
Loren's pov
Loren is on her way to her spot. She has the radio on. She just heard her song played. She smiled a little bit to herself.
Radio person: Next up is the new and hot single by the one and only Eddie Duran!
Oh god. I should turn the radio off. I just can't seem to do it. I haven't heard this one before. I haven't been listening to his music these past two months since we broke up... I guess I'll listen to it.
*Eddie singing
Here We go
Welcome to my Funeral
Without you
I don't even have a pulse
All alone it's dark and cold
With every move I die
He has no idea how I feel.
Here I go this is my confessional
A lost cause nobody can save my soul
I am so delusional
With every move I die
Has he even thought about how I feel?!
I have destroyed our love its gone
Payback is sick its all my fault
Hell yes you did.
I'm dancing with tears in my eyes
Just fighting to get through the night
I'm losing it (losing it) [x3]
With every move I die
I'm faded I'm broken inside
I've wasted the love of my life
I'm Losing it (losing it) [x3]
With every move I die
I can't take it! I should turn this off! Why do I feel the need to keep it on though?
When did I become such a hypocrite
Double life, lies that you caught me in
Trust me I'm paying for it
With every move I die
On the floor I'm just a zombie
Who I am is not who I wanna be
I'm such a tragedy
With every move I die
You're such a jerk Eddie!
I have destroyed our love its gone
Payback is sick its all my fault
I hate what you've done to me! I hate you so much!
I'm dancing with tears in my eyes
Just fighting to get through the night
I'm losing it (losing it) [x3]
With every move I die
I'm faded I'm broken inside
I've wasted the love of my life
I'm Losing it (losing it) [x3]
With every move I die
I cried for three days straight!
This is it
And now you're really gone
this time
Never once thought
I'd be in pieces left behind
I don't want to be gone! It's you're freaking fault that I am!
Im dancing with tears in my eyes
Just fighting to get through the night
I'm losing it (losing it) [x3]
With every move I die
I'm faded I'm broken inside
I've wasted the love of my life
I'm Losing it (losing it) [x3]
With every move I die
I died also Eddie. I tried not to show it though...
Radio person: Is this Eddie trying to get Loren back? Is Leddie really over like Loren has said?
Loren: SHUT UP!
Loren breaks down and starts crying. All of a sudden she see's a bright light and then everything goes dark...
Eddie's pov
Eddie's song had just played on the radio when a car goes into his lane causing his car to spin and crash into the car beside his.
So what did you guys think? One-shot or a full out story? R&R and let me know! Both song were by Ke$ha. The first song was blind. The second was dancing with tears in my eyes. I know that a girl wrote it and Eddie is singing it, I just thought it was perfect for the story. Anyway R&R PLEASE!