Just to tell you this is my first time writing a story and it's not that
good that's what I think about it but if you like it let me know ok!!!!!!
I've not wrote this entire story I've gotten help from a friend in Japan. I hope you'll enjoy reading this story and I'll try to get more chapters in if I can. This is part one of A New Cardcaptor.
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***Thoughts***
A New Cardcaptor
Sakura woke up and rushed down stairs, not getting changed; after all, it was her birthday today: April the 1st. What had Touya and her father bought her? And better yet, what had all her friends bought her? She didn't find a single present downstairs and was quite upset.
Touya came in to the room and said, "Wait for your presents until after dad comes back from work, squirt."
"Don't call me squirt," Sakura said real quickly and then added, "Have you forgotten my present? Because if you have, I won't get you one for your birthday-oh wait, I already have, and I've given it to you."
"Great, just great", Sakura said to herself, going upstairs, hoping her friends had bought her presents and weren't waiting to give them later on.
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"Excuse me; can you tell me where the Kinomoto house is?" a girl said to Li.
"Sakura, don't you know where your own house is?" Li said to the girl.
"I'm sorry; my name isn't Sakura. But Sakura is quite a nice name."
Li was confused and just played along, thinking Sakura had gone mad and was trying to fool him, as it was also April Fool's Day.
***I'll play along for her sake*** he said to himself and then said to the girl "I'll take you there, should I?"
***After I've helped Sakura to her house then I'll give he, her present*** Li thought to himself.
"That will be great! Thanks," the girl said.
Li didn't say anything on the way and neither did the girl. Finally, they got to Sakura's house.
"Aren't you going to say 'April Fool's'?" Li said to the girl.
"What for? I haven't played any joke on you; I don't even know who you are," the girl said.
Li was scared; what if it wasn't Sakura and this person, if she was one, was just a distraction so someone could do something to Sakura?
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"How long is Li going to take? We did tell him to meet here, didn't we?" Sakura said impatiently.
"Relax, Sakura; I'm sure he's on his way here right now," Tomoyo said, trying to calm Sakura down.
"Actually, he's already here outside with a girl," Kero said, looking outside the window.
"With another girl? Let me see!" Sakura said, rushing to the window.
"Okay, Sakura," Li said, trying to look cool (just in case the girl was some monstrous demon or something).
"I'm not Sakura," the girl said.
"Right, um.um.let's just open the door," Li said uneasily.
He rang the bell and Touya opened it and said, "Sakura, what are you doing with the brat?"
"I'm not a brat," Li said.
"And I'm not Sakura," the girl said.
"Yeah? Then who are you?" Touya said, sure of himself.
"Touya, she isn't Sakura! I'm Sakura," Sakura said from behind him.
There was a total silence, and then the two Sakuras' stared at each other, and then they both screamed and fainted. Then Kero said silently, so that Touya couldn't hear, "That was interesting."
~~~~~~~~~~~I'll be putting in part 2 soon and I hope you like this part~~~~~~~~~~~~
I've not wrote this entire story I've gotten help from a friend in Japan. I hope you'll enjoy reading this story and I'll try to get more chapters in if I can. This is part one of A New Cardcaptor.
-------- New paragraph/ change of scene
***Thoughts***
A New Cardcaptor
Sakura woke up and rushed down stairs, not getting changed; after all, it was her birthday today: April the 1st. What had Touya and her father bought her? And better yet, what had all her friends bought her? She didn't find a single present downstairs and was quite upset.
Touya came in to the room and said, "Wait for your presents until after dad comes back from work, squirt."
"Don't call me squirt," Sakura said real quickly and then added, "Have you forgotten my present? Because if you have, I won't get you one for your birthday-oh wait, I already have, and I've given it to you."
"Great, just great", Sakura said to herself, going upstairs, hoping her friends had bought her presents and weren't waiting to give them later on.
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"Excuse me; can you tell me where the Kinomoto house is?" a girl said to Li.
"Sakura, don't you know where your own house is?" Li said to the girl.
"I'm sorry; my name isn't Sakura. But Sakura is quite a nice name."
Li was confused and just played along, thinking Sakura had gone mad and was trying to fool him, as it was also April Fool's Day.
***I'll play along for her sake*** he said to himself and then said to the girl "I'll take you there, should I?"
***After I've helped Sakura to her house then I'll give he, her present*** Li thought to himself.
"That will be great! Thanks," the girl said.
Li didn't say anything on the way and neither did the girl. Finally, they got to Sakura's house.
"Aren't you going to say 'April Fool's'?" Li said to the girl.
"What for? I haven't played any joke on you; I don't even know who you are," the girl said.
Li was scared; what if it wasn't Sakura and this person, if she was one, was just a distraction so someone could do something to Sakura?
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"How long is Li going to take? We did tell him to meet here, didn't we?" Sakura said impatiently.
"Relax, Sakura; I'm sure he's on his way here right now," Tomoyo said, trying to calm Sakura down.
"Actually, he's already here outside with a girl," Kero said, looking outside the window.
"With another girl? Let me see!" Sakura said, rushing to the window.
"Okay, Sakura," Li said, trying to look cool (just in case the girl was some monstrous demon or something).
"I'm not Sakura," the girl said.
"Right, um.um.let's just open the door," Li said uneasily.
He rang the bell and Touya opened it and said, "Sakura, what are you doing with the brat?"
"I'm not a brat," Li said.
"And I'm not Sakura," the girl said.
"Yeah? Then who are you?" Touya said, sure of himself.
"Touya, she isn't Sakura! I'm Sakura," Sakura said from behind him.
There was a total silence, and then the two Sakuras' stared at each other, and then they both screamed and fainted. Then Kero said silently, so that Touya couldn't hear, "That was interesting."
~~~~~~~~~~~I'll be putting in part 2 soon and I hope you like this part~~~~~~~~~~~~