Chapter 1 – A Surprise
Hi I'm Mitchie Torres. I'm 17 years old and I have lived in Boston, Massachusetts for practically my whole life. My mom and I have lived there since I was 8 years old. My father ….left us before we moved to Boston. But when my mom got a job offer in Brasilia, Brazil, to be the head chief at some famous restaurant, she accepted. So we moved as soon as possible.
We moved there within a week of that fateful phone call. We've been here for about a month and a half. I started school 1 month ago, thank god I got to go American school, where American CEO'S children who live here go to, they have been nice. I've made a few friends, but closest is defiantly Caitlyn. She the nicest confident person you'll ever meet.
So here I'm May 22 2010 8:05 getting ready for school. Caitlyn texted me saying that she had a surprise for me and she'd tell me when were in school.
And so here I'm franticly trying to get ready for school.
"Mitchie hurry up! Or you'll be late for school" Mrs. Torres yelled of to her daughter.
"Ok I'm coming!" Mitchie screamed back
Mitchie quickly ran down stairs being careful not to trip. Once she is down stairs she grabs a granola bar from the kitchen and horks it down and goes to the car were he mom is waiting to bring her to school.
"Honey you've got to start going to bed earlier"
"Sorry, it's just that I was finishing writing one of my new songs." She told her mother.
"Ok, then from now on can you just try to go to bed earlier?
"It's ok ma it's just was a onetime thing."
Once they arrived in school it was already 8:50 so Mitchie goes directly to her locker grabs all the stuff she needs for the day. (AN before you ask why she's in school on Saturday well in Brazil the seniors have to go to school on Saturdays)
Then she went straight to her first class, which she just so happened to be next to her locker. As she walks in the room she sees a very excited Caitlyn who was bouncing up and down in her seat waiting for her to get there.
"So what's the big surprise, but before you answer did you put a couple of spoonfuls of suger in your cereal this morning for breakfast or something?" Mitchie asks her very hyper friend
"No, but guess what?"Caitlyn asks
"What"
"No actually guess"
"Um…ok….there serving cake in the cafeteria today"
"No, but they serve that every day"
"Oh well I didn't know. So, what's the big surprise?"
"I GOT US FRONT ROW TICKETTS TO THE CONNECT 3 WORLD TOUR CONCERT!FOR TONIGHT!
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