Poem About Liesal an Death................Please review!

Staring at the ceiling

Waiting for the bomb

Houses burning down

All night long

Bangs and explosion

Shaking every bone

People dying by the million

Hiding in a basement,

All alone

Being pulled out the rubble

A single survivor

The rescuers so admirable

Death standing by

Letting you life savour

The end now out of sight

Feel your young life, barely begun

You out-ran death that night

Saved by a friends book

Your family and friend he took

A young boy lusting for a kiss

Death stole them away

Always to be missed

He left with a sigh

"Liesal Meminger,

I shall be back for you,

When it is your turn to die

But for now child,

Goodbye."