Summary: They thought he was dead, they were wrong. Now they are dead and their children must pay. Kristen and her best friends now must stop a mad man from killing everybody in Haven City, but to do that, she'll have to go to the past, find her grandfather, and help him truly fulfill his destiny, by having Errol exterminated for eternity. Though she's known as the Dark Angel Child, she'll change her curse into a blessing.
GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Hello everybody and welcome to a brand new story...Written by me...(smiles)...So let's begin this story already, shall we...
Chapter 1: The Mistake
"Go ahead, finish me off!" yelled the cyborg, "But you're still nothing more than an Eco Freak!"
"Kill him Jak!" yelled Daxter. "This bastard deserves no mercy from us."
"No." said the long ago Channeler
"WHAT!" screeched the orange fur ball.
"If I kill him, I'll be just as bad as him." He replied, "And I'm not a killer." Looking at the cyborg Errol, Jak look straight into his good eye and said, "If I ever see or hear about you ever again, I promise you, that I WILL kill you. Got it!" Errol nodded numbly. Suddenly a ticking sound was heard.
"Jak..." began the orange rodent, "I think we should GO!"
Jak took off running toward Spargus City. Errol looked toward him and said, "We're not through, I'll be back." He then looked behind himself and noticed that the engine was on fire. "Damn." he said. Suddenly the entire sky lit up as if an Atom Bomb had gone off. The desert winds picked up, tossing everything toward the north, east, west, and south. As the two hero's emerged from the storm Ashelin Praxis stood up from her position by Sig and his buggy. "Congratulations Jak." She said and kissed his lips in a friendly way, but not too friendly.
"Thanks." he said, "I think."
"You killed Errol and destroyed the Dark Makers." she said, "The metal heads too are running away. You've saved us all."
"Yeah." said Daxter, "Do you think the world will stay quiet long enough for us to rest up?"
"You never know what tomorrow could bring." said Samos as he and Keira entered the garage.
Keira ran over to Jak's side and embraced him in a hug. "I'm glad you're safe Jak." she said this into his chest, for she was trying to hide a blush that was spreading across her face. "I-I love you Jak and I-I never want you to ever do anything stupid like that again."
Jak chuckled and lifted her chin so that he could see her eyes. "I love you too Keira and you'll never have to worry about that. Errol's dead, for good this time. Nobody could live through that explosion."
"That goodness." she said when suddenly Jak's lips slowly captured hers in a very passionate first kiss.
A cough broke their happiness though. They turned to see Torn staring at them. "The Precursors wish to talk to you in the arena."
"Let's go." Jak replied
"We have our future waiting for us." Keira said
"Damn straight!" exclaimed Daxter
Meanwhile
As the dessert winds began to calm down, you could definitely see where Jak Mar had fought Errol. Dark Maker ship parts were tossed everywhere. Purple goo began to appear underneath the wreckage. The goo was known as Dark Eco and the entire Dark Maker ship was make out of it. Pieces of Cyborg Errol were also among the wreckage and were slowly being engulfed in the Dark Eco. The faded left red eye of the cyborg was dark, indicating her was dead, but slowly the eye began to glow. As the ship and Dark Eco disappeared, a new being stood in its place. He was no longer a cyborg, but something else entirely, though he had the powers of the Dark Makers inside of him. There was only one thing it wanted to do...Kill the Eco Freak Jak...But that would take time...and it had plenty of time...
GoodMorningBeautiful2005: There's Chapter 1. I know it was short. Sorry about that. It was after all written at 11:49 p.m. Well tell me what you all think...Reviews Please!
