The Ghost of Valentine's Day
Chapter 1- Introduction
Hi my name is Camille. I live in the UK. I go to a private school called Georgetown. I'm 16 years old and I'm a real sporty girl.
I came downstairs for my usual breakfast with my parents, my 2 brothers, John and Luke. My older sister Carla, I was the youngest of the family.
I said "Good Morning everyone." "Good Morning dear" my mother said. "Oh here comes the tomboy, good morning brother." my brother Luke teased.
Luke was kind of annoying, he was 19yrs old he is in college already. My other brother is 21yrs old. He was the oldest among all of us brothers and sisters. Then there was my sister. She is 17yrs old she is also a coquette.
I can't believe I'm even related to her. We are so different. She is popular, beautiful and sexy everyone wants to be her. Now me I'm a sporty girl who you could say looks like and acts like a tomboy.
"Hurry up Camille or you are going to be late for school. You're sister is already in the car waiting." "Okay dad" was all I said.
Then we drove all the way to school without even talking. When we got to school I got out of the car but before I could leave dad said "Remember, I will not pick you up later so you better make sure by 5:30pm you are at our house. Don't get your mother worried about you."
"Okay dad I promise by 5:30 I'll be home." It was not fair my sister got to stay out later than me. Oh yeah because she has a boyfriend to drive her home.
Please tell me if you like the first part of the story. I need reviews. Tell me if my grammar is right and my spelling. Help me. You could also suggest some parts of the story.
Chapter 1- Introduction
Hi my name is Camille. I live in the UK. I go to a private school called Georgetown. I'm 16 years old and I'm a real sporty girl.
I came downstairs for my usual breakfast with my parents, my 2 brothers, John and Luke. My older sister Carla, I was the youngest of the family.
I said "Good Morning everyone." "Good Morning dear" my mother said. "Oh here comes the tomboy, good morning brother." my brother Luke teased.
Luke was kind of annoying, he was 19yrs old he is in college already. My other brother is 21yrs old. He was the oldest among all of us brothers and sisters. Then there was my sister. She is 17yrs old she is also a coquette.
I can't believe I'm even related to her. We are so different. She is popular, beautiful and sexy everyone wants to be her. Now me I'm a sporty girl who you could say looks like and acts like a tomboy.
"Hurry up Camille or you are going to be late for school. You're sister is already in the car waiting." "Okay dad" was all I said.
Then we drove all the way to school without even talking. When we got to school I got out of the car but before I could leave dad said "Remember, I will not pick you up later so you better make sure by 5:30pm you are at our house. Don't get your mother worried about you."
"Okay dad I promise by 5:30 I'll be home." It was not fair my sister got to stay out later than me. Oh yeah because she has a boyfriend to drive her home.
Please tell me if you like the first part of the story. I need reviews. Tell me if my grammar is right and my spelling. Help me. You could also suggest some parts of the story.