Hi, my name is suuz, and this is my first fanfic ever! Please read and review, and no flames are allowed. Critic is alright, but say why.
The second chapter will come soon.
Disclamer: The whole Joa-world doesn't belong to me.´
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Don't come with things like saying, luke is OoC. Of course he is, after all it´s a FANfic, written by me. Not the way he was on tv.
This story is beta-ed by XxX-phoenixgirl-XxX
Beybye! Have fun reading!
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The family GiardI is sitting in the kitching having breakfast.
Joan: "I'm going to fight Ryan Hunter."
Helen: "What! "
Kevin: "You don't have that lyme thing going on again, have you? "
Luke: "I'm staring at my cornflakes pretending I don't know her."
Joan: "I don't have that lyme thing! What are you talking about?"
Helen: "Why would you? He seems to be such a nice guy helping out wherever he can. "
Joan: "He thinks he can beat god!"
Luke: "it isn't prove that god exist but if he does exist it isn't im or-possible to beat god. But who believes the ryan guy if he says he can beat god?"
Helen and Kevin togheter: "Luke!"
Luke: "I'm staring at my cornflakes again."
Joan packs her bag for and walks out of the door.
Joan:"I'm going to Adam."
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At adams place
"HI jane, what are you doing here?" Adam asked " Hi, it might be sound a bit funny but you remembered when you said you believe me seeing god? " joan bites on her lip "Of course I remember, jane. I remember everything." Joan smiles "Yeah, euhm anyway.. I still see him and talk to him." A silent felt befor adam response "Okay Jane, I believe you."
"He still ask me to do things for him and for this one I need your help otherwise I'm going so down." "What kind of help? Do I have to make a movie with you or so?"
"Then I wouldn't be going down. You have to help me fight Ryan Hunter. " adam seems a bit shocked "Why? He's so nice to me. He even gave me a job. " joan's eyes fire up hearing how nice he is "Yeah he saved you gave you a job, he helps my dad at the police department, he helps my mom with god knows what! Don't you see it he's influeing everyone I love so he can win this battle! "
"Jane sit down. I'll help you. I'll do everything for you. "
Joan walks down to adam and put her arms around his neck.
Thinking about how much she loves him and she wouldn't let some slut get between them anymore. After they've fight ryan she would tell him. But without thinking her lips crosses his and a few seconds later they are really kissing.
"I love you, Jane."
"Oh adam, I love you too. But first we've gotto fight this ryan guy. "
A silence felt and we all know our Jane she can't stand silence so she starts talking again.
"Of course we need grace to help, Luke and friedman. Do you think you can convince them? "
"I'll try."
"Thanks. But now I've have to get a word with the almighty."
Later when Joan is in the bus he's there. Cute boy God.
"HI joan, I was expecting you!"
"What a suprise! You know everything."
"Don't be sarcastic with me, you might spit on my coat."
"For this time I need a favour. I need you to talk with my friends!"
"I haven't chosen them to do the job joan, I chose you."
"I need them but I can't do it without your help!" god looks in het eyes "Have a little trust in your friends, Joan. Start focussing about your mom ask her about the clowns!"
"You can't ask me to do that too!" Joan shouted
"I only give you hints Joan. And this one you can't miss. "
"What about the clowns?" but the buss stops and God already walks away.
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