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I ONW ONLY Caria
It was a cold night in Twinleaf town.a shadow loomed over the city, looking need help... sun rose,Caria stared at the happiness of her fellow people.'why am I so shy?'she was too scared to join them all,her shyness got in the way.''Ferno?'' Caria smiled at her partner,Monferno sat on her bed ''What should I do,Monferno?Im too Tochic to go out.'' Monferno rolled his eyes.''Your to get ready for the grand fetival,eh?'' Monfreno nodded,as if saying 'took ya long enough!' Caria laughed ''Well,let's go.'' she said,holding up her cheered and jumpd then left
sloppy and bad.i know,im nervous thank you to those readers and reveiw