This is a tottal....new this for me..so please tell me what you think..i know its short but one review that is all i ask plz do.

~StoryGirlAngel~

Claire just moved to morganville, with her parent. She wished so much that they would leave her alone, she was almost enghteen. Claire was never aloud to date, she was only allowed to go to school and come home and study. She had no life because of her family. She was Walking out of Starbucks when she see's a gothic looking girl probley a year older then her with a hot looking Angel, he had amazing eyes and lips, he looked just like a guy claire has been dreaming about. The Gothic Girl was holding hands with a Pale guy with sunglasses on and the was almost already down. That is just weard.
I wanted to just run over to them and become friends but claire would never do it because her parents were across the street running tords her. Claire is the good girl my parents friends always said. i threw the empty cup in the trash can and saw my parents very close to me.
"Claire Claire don't do that come back home, NOW YOUNG LADIE" my father yelled.
"NO!!! i am not going to go back home, i am almost eighteen leave me alone with a life for once, i don't want to go marry someone i don't even know just because you want me to" i said looking away, it was eather run threw the three good looking people or go with my parents and i wasn't going to do that. i bit my lip and grabed my backpack and ran, ran right threw them.
"hey watch it" the Angel looking guy said "Sorry" she said as she kept running.
"Someone get her" my father yelled "Claire don't do this, please don't go running off to go get yourself killed" my mother yelled, yeah i knew what she ment about that, it got my to stop right in my tracks. This town was full of Vampires and my mother and father wanted me to marry one, i felt tears go down my face.
"You know what mother, i would perfer to die then marry a Vampire that i don't know" i said running off again, into a dark ally and running and running, i couldn't stop running. my birthday was in two days and they wanted me to get marry, I didn't want to marry a freaking vampire. I wanted to marry a guy i was in love with. A guy who looked like that Angel back there. I knew i have been running for hours. But it felt good to run, it was running from a life i hated.i think i was in the middle of the forest. i feel down on my knees and began to cry. I wanted everything be better my parents not over protective me able to go up to people and talk to them.
"why did they have to be like that, I just want to be a teenage girl who has a life and go up to people and talk and not worry about getting married to a vampire" i said outloud knowing there was no one there "You should of just listen to your parents, its not a good thing to be alone out here at night" A male voice said from behind me "if i listen to them i would be getting married to a guy i don't even know" i said turning around to see the guy the gothic girl was holding onto. Something grabed me and pushed me very hard while a was screaming i hit my head on something, my head was hurting then i blanked out, see a picture of the three people, the Angel looking guy smiling. Claire wished so hard she could be with this guy like he was her one ture love.