Disclaimer: I don't own Diablo 2, blizzard does, at least i hope so.
Ok now the real story begins! ( Name if the main character is really crappy but thats the only things i can think of. If you have any suggestions of names tell me, i might use it!)
As Soulien walked across the damp dry grass, he was thinking about where he will go next and get some money. "I'll be suprised if anyone even lives here. There are demons everywhere." Then Soulien heard a shrilling scream. "What the hell was that!" He runs toward the sound. Then a blurry figure runs past him. "Wait up!" "Run!!!" The voice shouts. "Whats her problem?" Then he looks behind him. There it was, a stampede of demons and undeads and gargantiums. "Hoooly shit!!! There must be at least like 50 of em!!! Now THAT is a really good reason to run!" He runs as fast as he can.
After a while of running and screamming, Soulien finaly caught up with the rouge. "Man you are fast! Why are these monsters after you? And whats your name?" "My name is Flavie. I protect Rouge Encampment.Some monsters are was getting too close so I had to shoot them. Unfortunally, I shot Bishibosh the commander of fallens. He got mad and the stampede happened." She said. "We are getting close to the encampment. My sisters will help us battle. "Us battle? You mean YOU battle. I'm getting out of here!" "Oh comeon, you will be rewarded greatly." Flavie said. Did you say reward?" Soulien asked. "Im in!"
They duo came to the encampment and dozens of rouges came out shooting arrows. They also stopped running and started fighting. Flavie was shooting fire arrows rapidly while Soulien was throwing his blades at the hoard. The rouges were shocked to see souls flying everywhere. "What are thoes white things flying everywhere?" Flavie asked. "Thats just me sucking souls."Soulien answered"Makes my blades more effective." When the monsters got too close, Soulien started swinging his blade everywhere. Monster's souls where flying this way and that. You can just die from the sound! It sounds horrible!
A fallen can near Soulien and got his head slashed off. Soulien grabbed the head and started chanting something. Than suddenly, the fallen's soul can out of its mouth, eyes, and nose. It was screamming so loudly that the everyone started looking at him. Then the soul exploded right in front of Bishibosh! Bishibosh flew a few yard away and started cursing and firing fire balls everywhere. A few rouges got hit and died. "Die Bishibosh!!!" He slashed a couple of fallens to make his way to bishibosh. "Go back to the pits of hell! And don't even bother going in my blades! Suffer in hell!!!" With that he swung at bishibosh with all his might and choped Bishibosh in half.
After a while of screamming and killing, the remaining monsters ran away and the everyone started cheering. Then after it had settled down Kayasha came and had a talk with Flavie. "What the hell was that?!" Asked Kayasha "Sorry,it won't happen again." Flavie answered. "It had better not, or you can just say goodbye to your job!"kayasha walked away. "Whats her problem?" Asked Soulien. "Its getting late, can I stay here for the night?" "Sure!" Answered Flavie. And then they slept peacfuly resting from today's hard battle.
Ok is it better? Not just the boring intro anymore. Review and tell me if I should continue the story. By the way its my first fanfic story so don't expect a masterpiece.
Ok now the real story begins! ( Name if the main character is really crappy but thats the only things i can think of. If you have any suggestions of names tell me, i might use it!)
As Soulien walked across the damp dry grass, he was thinking about where he will go next and get some money. "I'll be suprised if anyone even lives here. There are demons everywhere." Then Soulien heard a shrilling scream. "What the hell was that!" He runs toward the sound. Then a blurry figure runs past him. "Wait up!" "Run!!!" The voice shouts. "Whats her problem?" Then he looks behind him. There it was, a stampede of demons and undeads and gargantiums. "Hoooly shit!!! There must be at least like 50 of em!!! Now THAT is a really good reason to run!" He runs as fast as he can.
After a while of running and screamming, Soulien finaly caught up with the rouge. "Man you are fast! Why are these monsters after you? And whats your name?" "My name is Flavie. I protect Rouge Encampment.Some monsters are was getting too close so I had to shoot them. Unfortunally, I shot Bishibosh the commander of fallens. He got mad and the stampede happened." She said. "We are getting close to the encampment. My sisters will help us battle. "Us battle? You mean YOU battle. I'm getting out of here!" "Oh comeon, you will be rewarded greatly." Flavie said. Did you say reward?" Soulien asked. "Im in!"
They duo came to the encampment and dozens of rouges came out shooting arrows. They also stopped running and started fighting. Flavie was shooting fire arrows rapidly while Soulien was throwing his blades at the hoard. The rouges were shocked to see souls flying everywhere. "What are thoes white things flying everywhere?" Flavie asked. "Thats just me sucking souls."Soulien answered"Makes my blades more effective." When the monsters got too close, Soulien started swinging his blade everywhere. Monster's souls where flying this way and that. You can just die from the sound! It sounds horrible!
A fallen can near Soulien and got his head slashed off. Soulien grabbed the head and started chanting something. Than suddenly, the fallen's soul can out of its mouth, eyes, and nose. It was screamming so loudly that the everyone started looking at him. Then the soul exploded right in front of Bishibosh! Bishibosh flew a few yard away and started cursing and firing fire balls everywhere. A few rouges got hit and died. "Die Bishibosh!!!" He slashed a couple of fallens to make his way to bishibosh. "Go back to the pits of hell! And don't even bother going in my blades! Suffer in hell!!!" With that he swung at bishibosh with all his might and choped Bishibosh in half.
After a while of screamming and killing, the remaining monsters ran away and the everyone started cheering. Then after it had settled down Kayasha came and had a talk with Flavie. "What the hell was that?!" Asked Kayasha "Sorry,it won't happen again." Flavie answered. "It had better not, or you can just say goodbye to your job!"kayasha walked away. "Whats her problem?" Asked Soulien. "Its getting late, can I stay here for the night?" "Sure!" Answered Flavie. And then they slept peacfuly resting from today's hard battle.
Ok is it better? Not just the boring intro anymore. Review and tell me if I should continue the story. By the way its my first fanfic story so don't expect a masterpiece.