First and formost. This is a fan-fiction, which means that if you don't
like the way the story goes, don't send me a review saying how something
could and couldn't have happend.....And remember, the story doesn't get
better, unless you review it. Enjoy!
"Just what the hell is going on?" Yelled King Yemma. In the las few weeks, billions of people had been steadily flowing through his checkpoint. The increase at work had given him an ulcer, and the constant chatter, had finally caused him to snap.
"Silence!!!!!! The next one of you who so much as coughs spends eterinty in Hell!" He looked around at the billions of races that stood before him as their fear of Hell and the giant that judged them glued their mouths shut. Because of the silence, a smile it his face. He figured he could finally figure out why there were so many people there at the same time. "Now, would someone please tell my why you are all here?"
One brave soul spoke up "Uh...because....um...dead?" King Yemma glared at the person and quietly asked "I meant why are you dead? Why are all of you dead? And lastly, why are all of you dead at the same time?" One voice in the masses shouted out. "It was that pink kid!" Several others shouted that they had also encountered this "pink kid".
King Yemma mouth fell as the implications of what he heard hit him like a ton of bricks. "It....couldn't be...he was destroyed....but then his soul never passed.......................
"Yes, I am afraid that is so, King Yemma." A new voice spoke up, as silence once fell upon the masses. "And I am afraid that it will only get worse. We had thought him defeated, along with Bibi Di, but alas it wasn't so. He was revived by his son Babi Di...Majin Buu has returned.....................................................
R&R
To those of you who had read this fic before, as you can tell, this is a major rewrite. I decided to take a break and rethink what I was doing, and where i was going wrong. The first of the changes will be that Trunks will not have any children. I decided that I just didn't want get too complicated with the writting. Second; The characters in this fic will be stronger than normal, as well as the enemies. I do not know how long the fic will be. You readers will decide, and i will take my cue from you. If you have suggestions, go ahead and let me know in a review or an email. I will gladly take any time of criticism in hand. and will even reply to the good ones. If you want to be on the mailing list, just leave your email.
"Just what the hell is going on?" Yelled King Yemma. In the las few weeks, billions of people had been steadily flowing through his checkpoint. The increase at work had given him an ulcer, and the constant chatter, had finally caused him to snap.
"Silence!!!!!! The next one of you who so much as coughs spends eterinty in Hell!" He looked around at the billions of races that stood before him as their fear of Hell and the giant that judged them glued their mouths shut. Because of the silence, a smile it his face. He figured he could finally figure out why there were so many people there at the same time. "Now, would someone please tell my why you are all here?"
One brave soul spoke up "Uh...because....um...dead?" King Yemma glared at the person and quietly asked "I meant why are you dead? Why are all of you dead? And lastly, why are all of you dead at the same time?" One voice in the masses shouted out. "It was that pink kid!" Several others shouted that they had also encountered this "pink kid".
King Yemma mouth fell as the implications of what he heard hit him like a ton of bricks. "It....couldn't be...he was destroyed....but then his soul never passed.......................
"Yes, I am afraid that is so, King Yemma." A new voice spoke up, as silence once fell upon the masses. "And I am afraid that it will only get worse. We had thought him defeated, along with Bibi Di, but alas it wasn't so. He was revived by his son Babi Di...Majin Buu has returned.....................................................
R&R
To those of you who had read this fic before, as you can tell, this is a major rewrite. I decided to take a break and rethink what I was doing, and where i was going wrong. The first of the changes will be that Trunks will not have any children. I decided that I just didn't want get too complicated with the writting. Second; The characters in this fic will be stronger than normal, as well as the enemies. I do not know how long the fic will be. You readers will decide, and i will take my cue from you. If you have suggestions, go ahead and let me know in a review or an email. I will gladly take any time of criticism in hand. and will even reply to the good ones. If you want to be on the mailing list, just leave your email.