Hi people! My name is Aki, and I am the author of this story's sister. The reason I am writing this is because I saw the complaints on grammer so I offered to become her beta. I can't change the story nor her writing style, but I can only fix the grammer and spelling errors. If you are interested in reading my story, look up the username, Lilytothelake, and you will find it. Thanks, and I am not the author of this story. Just the beta. Enjoy, and if you find any other errors you would like to point out, please private message me.

"Kami!" Naruto called out. " Kami, Where are you?" Naruto called out again.

"Naruto, I'm over here," I said.

Naruto hurried over to his sisters voice. "Where were you?" Naruto asked, out of breath from running.

"I was only picking flowers for mom. You know she's ill," I said in a really sad voice.

"I know, but do you really think mom is going to want you sick?"asked Naruto.

"No, but I only wanted to make her feel better,"I said.

"I know, but we have to go," said Naruto

"Okay."

When we got to the Dark River, and I was all the way across, I let out a scream. Naruto then turned towards the sound of my voice and he saw the two members of the akatsuki who stood before me.

When he was finally across, I watched as he started fighting Kisame, while I was beside him fighting Itachi. After awhile of fighting, Naruto asked what they wanted. Soon Kisame answered saying they wanted the girl.

"Well, sorry to disappoint you, but you are not getting her,"said Naruto..

"Oh and who is going to stop us?"asked Kisame.

"I am,"stated Naruto

"Well, I have to go,"says Kisame smirking.

"What! Why!"exclaimed Naruto

"Sorry,but Itachi already has the girl," Kisame says before knocking Naruto out.

"So now what do we do? Just go back to the hideout?" I heard Kisame ask Itachi.

"Yeah," Itachi said. Then he went back to eating his rice ball. Since they wouldn't untie my hands they had to feed me. '

No way am I being fed,' I thought.

So I wouldn't eat it. Then Kisame kept hitting my face with the rice ball until Itachi said it was all I would be getting to eat.

So when I said fine, Kisame says "What if I don't want to now?"

"If she faints you're going to be the one to carry her so just feed her,"said Itachi in his usual emotionless voice.

"Whatever," he said and whenever he got close enough I snapped his hand. Then I instantly spit it out because it tasted like sushi. Soon I heard him shout "SHE BIT ME!That little brat bit me! That's it, she's dead!"He said raising Samahada. Then Itachi told him to stop but he didn't. So I closed my eyes ready for the hit but when it didn't come I opened my eyes to see Itachi stopped the sword. Then I realized I was holding my breath. Then I let out a long sigh.

After a minute Itachi said, "I told you to stop. Now do it."

"Whatever, but she still bit me,"Kisame muttered.

"I know, and as for you," he said turning to me, "I would leave Kisame alone because if I weren't here you would be dead."

" Whatever," I muttered under my breath.