Ok here goes my first story. Please tell me what you think. I would like to hear all the bad and good comments upon this story that you have. Please tell me what you think. Ok I am getting nervous now I should begin before I back out. Disclaimer: I do not own Yu Yu Hakusho, and .Hack.
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All of a sudden a high pitch sad scream filled the dark square room. The girl that was standing in the middle of the dark room fell to the floor crying and covering her ears. With her first tear that she cried when it hit the floor, the sad shrieking scream stopped. Everything stopped, like the time was frozen. Then with a huge blinding flash of light, which filled the room. When the light faded in the center was a golden fairy floating in mid air. She was beautiful, with long blonde hair, and her wings. She was like a fairy goddess.
The goddess started to say something, but her voice was so unexpected it said, "Rachel, Rachel, RACHEL. WAKE UP ALREADY."
The tall blonde haired girl rolled over stretching. As she rubbed her one eye that was opened she yawned and said at the same time, "What?"
"Rachel, school is about to start in ten minutes." Said her mom, "Cassie is waiting for you outside now."
"What?" said Rachel as she sat up quickly.
A voice came from outside, "Rachel if you don't get out her now. I swear I am leaving you to walk by yourself." Said a brown haired girl, wearing a blue school uniform.
"Ok, Ok, I am up." Said Rachel as she jumped out of bed and put on her blue skirt, and white shirt. She ran downstairs as her mom handed her a pop tart and ran outside to meet her friend Cassie.
"Finally you woke up, it took ten minutes of my time standing out here, what third time this week. I mean, you really need to get to bed on time." Said Cassie
"Yeah, yeah. Well maybe if the teachers actually didn't give us so much homework I could actually get to bed on time."
"May be if you actually did your homework when you got home instead of playing your games you wouldn't have this problem." Said Cassie with a sweat drop coming down on her face. "You should be more responsible."
"Yeah like you?" said Rachel with a laugh.
"You will never learn."
"Yeah you are probably right." Said Rachel with a slight laugh.
"We better hurry the bell is going to ring soon, and we still have a long walk."
"Chill we will eventually get there, you worry way to much." Said Rachel
"You don't worry enough," sighed Cassie.
"Very funny, I do just I am in such a sleepy daze we could be in school in a second and I wouldn't realize it."
Just then Cassie and Rachel were right in front of the school. Cassie looked at Rachel and Rachel at Cassie. Rachel said, "Ok I take that back, I would realize it."
Cassie looked at Rachel and gave her a funny look, and said "Ok!? What just happened?"
"I don't know, but look on the bright side, we are not late the bell for school has just rung."
Just then a tall boy came over and said to Rachel and Cassie, "Hello ladies."
Cassie said, "Hi Taylor."
"Bonjour Taylor." Said Rachel.
"Bonjour. Je n'aime pas parler dans francais." Said Tylor
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Ok little side note for people who don't take French. Oo and please don't chew my head off if I spell something in French wrong, or put a word in the wrong place. Ok Well
Bonjour means Hello
Je n'aime pas parler dans francais means I don't like to talk in French
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"Yeah, I know. It is my best class, I guess it just comes natural." Said Rachel
Taylor said, "True it is like the only class you can pass too."
Rachel hit him. "Hey I am beating you in all my classes, so what are you talking about."
"Rachel we better get to homeroom early we have to create the spring banner for the dance." Said Cassie
"Ok, ok lets go." Said Rachel.
Rachel and Cassie went to Mr. Derang's room to get the banner.
"Ok Rachel you know that we are meeting 10th period to do this, in Mr. Smith's room. Got it?" Said Cassie
"Yes I got it." Replied Rachel
"Bye, Mr. Derang." Said Rachel and Cassie as they walked out of Mr. Derang's room. Cassie and Rachel then headed to their lockers to get their books for first period. As they grabbed their books and closed their lockers a kid was coming up the halls and accidentally bumped into them. He said, "Sorry," and was on his way.
Cassie said, "I haven't seen him around before, and I do almost know everyone in this school."
"Yeah, neither have I, and he really gives me the creeps." Said Rachel and she starred back at the kid. She saw a note lying on the floor. "Hey Cassie look at this." As she pointed to the note.
Cassie stared at the note and said, "Well it is addressed to you, pick it up and read it."
Rachel picked up the note and read it.
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Ok that is the end of Chapter one. Thank god! I never thought writing out a fan fic would be so hard I can tell stories to friends and make my own stories, but this is harder then it looks. I know in this chapter it does not have anime, but in chapter 3 and on it does. I thank everyone for reading, and please review. Hope you all liked it. Please keep on reading, it gets better as the story gets longer. You review my story my thanks to you is I will review all your stories and recommend them.