Strange creature.(Part 1)
Rated: PG13 for creature violence, language, and scary moments. Genre: Sci-fi
In Spargus city, a lot of people have claimed to see something weird flying around. The city eccentric really had nothing to say about it, except he claims that he had something truly unique of his own, but he wouldn't show it to anyone. His neighbor, Bravo, always tried to see what the old man had, but his whole house was like a fortress. Except his swimming pool on the side of his house. One day, Bravo went over to the old man's house to see if he could witness the creature, the old man had. "Howdy neighbor!", Bravo said happily. I was just strolling around the neighborhood and..."
"What do you want Bravo?", the old man asked. "You want to see the creature, yes?"
Bravo opened his mouth, just about to speak. Before he could say anything, the old man closed the door in Bravo's face.
At the detective agency, Bravo was complaining to the pretty, former Krimson Knight, Stelle.
"I can't believe it Stelle! Why won't that old bastard show anyone what's in his house?!", Bravo whined. Stelle just smiled seriously. "Perhaps it's just meant to be. The old man probably thinks the world isn't ready for it yet.", she said.
"What are you two discussing?", Sig asked.
"Bravo's just sore because the crazy man who he lives next to won't show him something that's in his house.", Stelle told him.
"You mean the creature?", Torn asked as he came in.
Stelle sighed with annoyance. "Not you too. Do you really believe that there is something in that man's house?!"
"Maybe she's right Bravo,", Sig replied. "Who really knows if that man is lying his ass off!?"
Bravo just sighed and told them that he needed to think for a while. Walking home, he heard a splash coming from the swimming pool from the old man's house. It could have been the old man's wife he thought, but the old man's wife wasn't big enough to make a splash like that.
"Maybe Stelle WAS right. I guess the world's not ready for it.", Bravo thought to himself. But his curiosity got the better of him. He got a little closer to the big wooden fence that was guarding the pool. It was really tall and he couldn't climb, so Bravo could only imagine what was on the other side. All of a sudden, he believed to have seen a large fish tail shoot straight up.
"I can't believe this. I really can't believe this!", Bravo said to himself.
The tail just wiggled around a little, and quickly fell. It made a giant splash. Bravo was just about to try and pry the gate open, until he heard a strange sound. It was low frequency like a whale, but deep like a growl almost. "Coo caw, coo caw." It sounded like.
"That's it. I have to see what's in there!", Bravo thought.
He busted the gate down with a crowbar, and looked in the swimming pool. Bravo looked deep into the water, but he couldn't see anything.
"Fruit sorbet! I guess there isn't anything in here. Maybe it was my imagination."
Disappointed, Bravo walked away. Just before he got to the fence, the water splashed and the creature flopped on land. Bravo quickly turned and couldn't believe his eyes. He saw the tail that shot up earlier, but in front of the tail was even more amazing. There was a woman attached to it. A mermaid! And a funny looking one at that! Her tail was light blue, her skin was white like chalk and her hair was darker than ebony. Also, her eyes and lips were the strangest. They were the same color, red. Except the pupils in her eyes were yellow and shaped like slits. Almost like cat's eyes. Thank heavens she was at least a black tube top. Only question was, is she friendly?
"So you're what the old man has!", Bravo said happily. "Can you talk?"
The mermaid just stared at Bravo with a confused look. She tried wiggling to stand up. Bravo moved closer to her. Almost like she was a pet. Finally the mermaid stood up. She towered over Bravo who was at least 6'4''. She had to be about 7'5'' standing up! Bravo didn't know much about mermaids and especially didn't know what do with this one. So he tried to strike a conversation with it. He pulled some candy out of his pocket.
"See?", he said slowly. "Candy, good. I eat candy, you eat candy?"
Bravo ate a piece and handed the other to the mermaid to see if she would eat it. He tossed it in the air to and wondered if she would catch it like a crocadog or a seagull. She did. It looked like she liked it because she opened her mouth again and showed her razor sharp looking teeth
"I can't believe this! A real mermaid and she likes me!", Bravo cried.
Suddenly, he heard the old man stirring in his house. It made Bravo nervous but it didn't bother the mermaid. She was just concerned about her getting candy. Bravo hesitated a bit. Finally, he just gave all his candy to the mermaid and told her that he would be back tomorrow. The mermaid squealed happily and jumped back into the water. Bravo ran to his house, before the old man came out and he called Torn and Sig to tell them what he saw. Bravo wanted to surprise Stelle with a real live mermaid. But he would have to wait until the next day.
To Be Continued.
Reviews welcome. Tell me what you think of my fan fic.
Rated: PG13 for creature violence, language, and scary moments. Genre: Sci-fi
In Spargus city, a lot of people have claimed to see something weird flying around. The city eccentric really had nothing to say about it, except he claims that he had something truly unique of his own, but he wouldn't show it to anyone. His neighbor, Bravo, always tried to see what the old man had, but his whole house was like a fortress. Except his swimming pool on the side of his house. One day, Bravo went over to the old man's house to see if he could witness the creature, the old man had. "Howdy neighbor!", Bravo said happily. I was just strolling around the neighborhood and..."
"What do you want Bravo?", the old man asked. "You want to see the creature, yes?"
Bravo opened his mouth, just about to speak. Before he could say anything, the old man closed the door in Bravo's face.
At the detective agency, Bravo was complaining to the pretty, former Krimson Knight, Stelle.
"I can't believe it Stelle! Why won't that old bastard show anyone what's in his house?!", Bravo whined. Stelle just smiled seriously. "Perhaps it's just meant to be. The old man probably thinks the world isn't ready for it yet.", she said.
"What are you two discussing?", Sig asked.
"Bravo's just sore because the crazy man who he lives next to won't show him something that's in his house.", Stelle told him.
"You mean the creature?", Torn asked as he came in.
Stelle sighed with annoyance. "Not you too. Do you really believe that there is something in that man's house?!"
"Maybe she's right Bravo,", Sig replied. "Who really knows if that man is lying his ass off!?"
Bravo just sighed and told them that he needed to think for a while. Walking home, he heard a splash coming from the swimming pool from the old man's house. It could have been the old man's wife he thought, but the old man's wife wasn't big enough to make a splash like that.
"Maybe Stelle WAS right. I guess the world's not ready for it.", Bravo thought to himself. But his curiosity got the better of him. He got a little closer to the big wooden fence that was guarding the pool. It was really tall and he couldn't climb, so Bravo could only imagine what was on the other side. All of a sudden, he believed to have seen a large fish tail shoot straight up.
"I can't believe this. I really can't believe this!", Bravo said to himself.
The tail just wiggled around a little, and quickly fell. It made a giant splash. Bravo was just about to try and pry the gate open, until he heard a strange sound. It was low frequency like a whale, but deep like a growl almost. "Coo caw, coo caw." It sounded like.
"That's it. I have to see what's in there!", Bravo thought.
He busted the gate down with a crowbar, and looked in the swimming pool. Bravo looked deep into the water, but he couldn't see anything.
"Fruit sorbet! I guess there isn't anything in here. Maybe it was my imagination."
Disappointed, Bravo walked away. Just before he got to the fence, the water splashed and the creature flopped on land. Bravo quickly turned and couldn't believe his eyes. He saw the tail that shot up earlier, but in front of the tail was even more amazing. There was a woman attached to it. A mermaid! And a funny looking one at that! Her tail was light blue, her skin was white like chalk and her hair was darker than ebony. Also, her eyes and lips were the strangest. They were the same color, red. Except the pupils in her eyes were yellow and shaped like slits. Almost like cat's eyes. Thank heavens she was at least a black tube top. Only question was, is she friendly?
"So you're what the old man has!", Bravo said happily. "Can you talk?"
The mermaid just stared at Bravo with a confused look. She tried wiggling to stand up. Bravo moved closer to her. Almost like she was a pet. Finally the mermaid stood up. She towered over Bravo who was at least 6'4''. She had to be about 7'5'' standing up! Bravo didn't know much about mermaids and especially didn't know what do with this one. So he tried to strike a conversation with it. He pulled some candy out of his pocket.
"See?", he said slowly. "Candy, good. I eat candy, you eat candy?"
Bravo ate a piece and handed the other to the mermaid to see if she would eat it. He tossed it in the air to and wondered if she would catch it like a crocadog or a seagull. She did. It looked like she liked it because she opened her mouth again and showed her razor sharp looking teeth
"I can't believe this! A real mermaid and she likes me!", Bravo cried.
Suddenly, he heard the old man stirring in his house. It made Bravo nervous but it didn't bother the mermaid. She was just concerned about her getting candy. Bravo hesitated a bit. Finally, he just gave all his candy to the mermaid and told her that he would be back tomorrow. The mermaid squealed happily and jumped back into the water. Bravo ran to his house, before the old man came out and he called Torn and Sig to tell them what he saw. Bravo wanted to surprise Stelle with a real live mermaid. But he would have to wait until the next day.
To Be Continued.
Reviews welcome. Tell me what you think of my fan fic.