Disclaimer: I do not own the Outsiders! If I did Johnny and Dally wouldn't have died!
Giving Me Up?
Johnny was speechless. How could they do that to him? He accepted all the beatings because he loved them, but now they do this. How could they be such bad parents? What did he do to make them hate him so much? After he got the news from his dad he ran out of the house. His father didn't even try to go after him and console him in any way, because he really didn't care. Johnny ran to the Curtis' home. He didn't bother knocking, no one ever did. When he was in the room he slammed the front door shut. Automatically all heads turned and everyone was watching him.
"Hey, what's wrong Johnnycake?" asked Darry. Putting his paper down and standing from his seat. Johnny's eyes started to tear up.
"M-m-my folks,… th-they.."
"Did they hit you again?" shouted Dally as he shot up from his seat.
"No! They're leaving me!" Johnny began to sob.
"They told me… they're movin', and their not takin me... they're putting me up for adoption!"
Johnny fell to his knees and everyone in the room was speechless.
I know it's very short. But it's just a draft, I'll fix it and repost it again. But I wanted to ask you guys for tips on how to fix my story. So, please review! .